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Anonymous
5/9/18, 11:52 AM
Haha holy cow this story. Someone make this into a video. "'...It was brotherly love I wanted. Not the kind where you beat each other up for the hell of it, but the warm kind, the kind that brings you almost a kind of...delight.' Without warning, Karl felt as if the volume in the room was quickly rising, turning the doctor's last word into an unintelligible sharp whine that kept its pitch for so long, Karl thought his eardrums would break. The sound was so piercing that it seemed to mess with his vision; he blindly flailed his arms, trying to push the doctor away. And then, just as suddenly as it came, the noise stopped dead and Karl's body went slack, his body slumping forward onto his chest. He nearly tipped over the exam table, but the doctor's strong arms wrapped around him and kept him sitting upright. 'There you go,' Burrows said, his voice still steady and low. He placed the device in his hand onto the nearby counter. From its pointed tip, the blue light continued to flash periodically. ..." Love it!
Tim
5/9/18, 10:49 AM
Justice delivered. Nice :)
Bart
5/9/18, 10:17 AM
It's weird but I really liked that the body swap was temporary. Nicely done, man :)
Jan 29, 2018
Ted
5/9/18, 9:58 AM
Fantastic. The best mind control story that I've ever read because it contained a gem of truth. We make our own happiness. Loved it.
Anonymous
5/9/18, 7:09 AM
hot story. The humiliation was awesome. I hope you continue the story.
5/9/18, 6:59 AM
Its like a porno be carefulmwhat wish for Bruce coville novel. So wish continue or similar idea or viewpoint used
Bmax
5/9/18, 4:33 AM
Tomozco, long time no hear. Have you come up with any of your incredible stories. I know that there are many of us waiting to read your next exciting story or better yet; series?
Jan 31, 2016
Anonymous
5/9/18, 4:19 AM
super hot!
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5/9/18, 1:39 AM
Can I volunteer to be of service, SIR?
5/9/18, 1:02 AM
I was just reminiscing about this story and its overall feel and intention. Admittedly I might have just been in a weird place myself but I didn't remember it necessarily being the hottest thing ever. But I really like the idea and some of the way it played out. I just wanted to give it a comment so that that way if the author is ever watching their work they realize that I hope that they continue and improve and refine their craft. If not come back to this idea so that that way they can play it out some more