Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/6/18, 11:53 PM
very well written... perhaps i'm in the minority in that I think the tf was way too subtle. It wasn't as obvious as i like it, and it was kind of an abrupt change. I felt like it was 3/4 set up and 1/4 tf. what caused the blackouts? did Jake? the pot? did Jake hypnotize or MC the main character? How much time passed between the passing out on the construction site and at the gym? I think the answers don't really matter, and are left up to the reader to interpret themselves, but I really dislike those kinds of stories... lol..
UchihaDEMS
5/6/18, 10:37 PM
I'm so glad you pick dilfs as victims, not common and a totally a turn on for me! Btw, about the idea of the others readers... Why an older brother? Make some other growth up man think he is the little brother! <3
Anonymous
5/6/18, 10:07 PM
Yes. An older brother he had not seen for a long time. And more degrading commands.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 9:47 PM
I have no idea what happened with this story. Extremely confusing....
Anonymous
5/6/18, 9:09 PM
Incredible! Well-written and crafted. Not sure there's a sequel in this story, but to see where it goes would be nice.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 6:09 PM
Bit of name confusion in a lot of places too. Hope you get to edit! Love this story
5/6/18, 5:29 PM
"If I see a RobinHood70 story, I jack off to it." Muahahaha...the power! :P
Anonymous
5/6/18, 5:00 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
5/6/18, 3:00 PM
Like a Fight Club-esque narrative:)
Anonymous
5/6/18, 2:28 PM
Give josh an older brother that he hadn’t seen from in a long time