Recent Comments

11/8/25, 9:01 PM
It looks like the main Krankr series is also flagged as being a Halloween entry. Is that a mistake?
11/7/25, 6:27 AM
Very Nice….I was expecting Nate to be in on it…or the mentalist to have purposely implanted commands with hidden intentions…i have read too many evil hypnotist stories! I always enjoy your writings.

11/8/25, 6:55 PM
@[Pupwhosits](/user/show/10052184) I considered Nate behaving maliciously, but I opted for a sweeter end
11/8/25, 5:37 PM
Great start, love the past and present crashing in his psyche!

Anonymous
11/8/25, 5:38 PM
@[WhiteyPA](/user/show/10021235) Thanks… there will be a past present/fantasy collision in part four.
11/8/25, 4:56 PM
The storytelling here was absolutely phenomenal. I loved it so much. The smut was amazing, but the way you packaged it all together made for a genuinely good read. Thank you!
11/8/25, 4:26 PM
I need more!! :D
10/29/25, 2:21 AM
Im reloading this page everyday with hope of seeing more of this story, this is do hot

10/30/25, 5:21 AM
@[Ruperstiltskin](/user/show/10029547) Thank you! I’m excited about the next chapter so I’m hoping to get it out as soon as I can!
Adam
11/8/25, 4:10 PM
Loved the start!

Anonymous
11/8/25, 4:13 PM
@Adam Hey thanks
11/8/25, 3:56 PM
A private detective (whom his mother and father secretly approached five years later) could have helped Nathaniel uncover and rescue him, after which a romantic relationship could have developed between them. And Ethan and N would have been on the run as dangerous criminals (Bonnie and Clyde), with their own narrative arc and sex.
11/8/25, 3:52 PM
Great story, it will be funny when the real Nathaniel is discovered by accident in a few years, when suspicions about the clone's behavior have been brewing for years among friends and parents (this always happens), a new person comes to replace the other (no matter how perfect he is, you can't replace someone forever). It would be interesting to see how the real Nathaniel will hunt them down when his clone and Ethan are on the run with the money. I would like to read something like that.
Thomasz
11/8/25, 3:50 PM
Loving this story. I really want to see the frat guys transform into a military unit! Shaved heads, camo and boots!