Recent Comments

8/4/25, 11:46 AM
Una de las mejores historias que he leído! La manera en la que lo convencieron que era lo correcto por hacer como buen ciudadano progresivamente fue increíble, me habría encantado que el gangbang hubiera sido todos dándole en 4 y preñándolo, bueno pueden haber mas inspecciones jeje, excelente historia!!
Anonymous
8/4/25, 11:18 AM
I'd love for the team to have a sudden breakthrough, with all the formulas they are testing it would be great to see one of them work a bit, maybe give the transformed items a way to communicate without being in the special room? I think that would really give all the characters some hope and drive and really bring some nice fresh energy.
5/19/25, 4:05 PM
Another great chapter mate, ano u prob have the nxt victims sorted but defo want to see him lean into a corruptive deamon side an turn sum posh four eyed wanker that looks down on him and his new house into a horny inked chav with a need to breed

5/19/25, 4:49 PM
@[DarkFox](/user/show/10021702) I do have things worked out for the most part. There is a chapter where this suggestion could work.

8/4/25, 11:09 AM
@[DarkFox](/user/show/10021702) Latest chapter is up. Thanks for the suggestion.
8/3/25, 1:16 PM
The gentleness, passion and acceptance of Dale was everything to me. The protagonist's need to let go and the fear of the consequences were both seen and understood, then embraced and. I felt so aroused and cared for and loved as the reader through the character. The Dales of this world are beautiful and amazing and you did a phenomenal job describing and bring Dale to life. Well done!

8/4/25, 11:05 AM
@[OtterBear92](/user/show/995167) Aww, I’m so glad that came across! The contrast of the desire/fear of the main character and the characterisation of Dale’s easy acceptance and creation of a space for that control to be given away were the driving points for me in telling the story. Thank you for your beautiful reflection on these themes, and certainly the world needs more Dales!
Jul 19, 2024
8/4/25, 8:03 AM
Yeah man! Keep this coming.
8/4/25, 7:38 AM
Would love to see more of this?
GWR
8/4/25, 4:43 AM
Excellent story - laser focused on the surrender part. I have to admit there is part of me that would really like the story of Lucien touching (telekinetically and/or physically) Sol in his more intimate parts and Sol’s reaction to getting used that way by another man but I can see how leaving that out allows the focus to remain on the mental control and surrender and allows the reader to use their own imagination for what goes on in those deeper chambers

8/4/25, 6:05 AM
@[GWR](/user/show/10010412) HELLOOOOOOO! Thank you for commenting! This is my first story here and this originally had only 13 chapters which was the first part. But my friend got invested and made digital art, and it became soooo much more. I hope you enjoy reading the rest. There are 5 parts that is scheduled to release weekly or a little bit later than that, but it's all completed. But if you wanna push through with the rest they're also at wattpad, which should continue at chapter 28 after the events of part 2. Would appreciate comments/ thoughts you wanna see happen there too. https://www.wattpad.com/story/398549009?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=mitsu_110294
Jul 26, 2025
Ome
8/4/25, 2:22 AM
OK ok ok cute
Anonymous
8/3/25, 11:43 PM
Amazing as always