Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/28/18, 8:43 AM
Very good story! Would love more chapters, maybe elaborating when Cupid retrieves an arrow mid-fuck.
Anonymous
5/28/18, 5:56 AM
Interesting new idea! Let’s see where it takes us
Anonymous
5/28/18, 4:41 AM
Nice development. Hoping to see more.
Anonymous
5/28/18, 3:35 AM
great job! One of the better additions lately.
jacobstone1980@gmailcom
5/28/18, 1:11 AM
can you please email me
cc: JJ
5/28/18, 12:53 AM
I never presume to tell a writer what to write. After all, it's his story. But I totally agree with the "no happy endings" comment. The surest way to lose me as a reader is to make the hero break the spell the villain has over him. I can read those kind of stories anywhere. A good hypno / brainwashing story means their minds remain under their enslaver's control for good. Isn't that what the whole fetish is all about?
J.J.
5/28/18, 12:26 AM
So far so good. I hope the villain's name means there will be spirals involved. And I know Superman is the focus but I also hope Batman, Robin, Cap & Tarzan aren't all brainwashed just yet. I'd like for Superman to see just one of others' transformation from hero to clown before he succumbs too. And please NO happy endings! MC must prevail!
blankbot
5/27/18, 11:56 PM
How about something along the lines of the 1994 Robert A. Henlein sci-fi movie The Puppet Masters? Another idea: something along PupScout's excellent The Submarine. On a non-sci-fi track, what about an adaptation of MM Good's To Serve Their Country (mcstories.com)?
Gayboi
5/27/18, 11:46 PM
I love it. More as soon as possible please, and thank you.
A.
5/27/18, 11:43 PM
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