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Willie Cici
4/10/18, 3:13 PM
Trent is an escort/bodyguard. 'Fernando' is an escort, part of a network, that captures 'johns' and converts them into network soldiers. Trent became a new 'Fernando', another soldier. The 'Fernando' that walked into Trent's hotel room stole Trent's persona. The 'John' at the end of the story is another prostitute's client, a 'jon'. He's not necessarily a target. Remember, the infomercial advertises 'sex escorts'. Fernando, the former Trent, is now working the town. Now, I have to be honest. I don't think I thought this one out. Why would 'Fernando' steal 'Trent's likeness'? Where did he go? What's his game? I would invite anyone reading the story and this comment to post suggestions for how this story could continue.
Anonymous
4/10/18, 2:28 PM
I always love the idea of being forced to live somebody else’s life....so Johnis trapped inside his new hot Latin body powerless...to live as Fernando. The escort he secretly mocked. A straight man forced to live the rest of this life as a horney, slutty boy toy.
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:58 AM
Excellent story!!!
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:58 AM
Excellent story!!!
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:58 AM
I give you credit. Episodic writing is not easy. This is a great read, interesting, dare I say, thought provoking.
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:51 AM
Where's part 3?
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:50 AM
That was funny!! At first, I saw the dog and I thought, "This is going to be weird." Instead, you kept it funny, but 'sexo-bestial'. Good story.
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:49 AM
What if 'John" is just a 'jon'? A schlub? Fernando took Trent's body because Trent was smoking hot. That's the key. But I didn't write it, so maybe Willie will have to tell us.
Anonymous
4/10/18, 1:56 AM
I’d stay as Fernando
Anonymous
4/10/18, 12:10 AM
Please keep this rolling