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3/29/18, 5:31 AM
Please write more. This is great!
Anonymous
3/29/18, 5:00 AM
Can't wait for part two to find out what happened with Leo and how Dustin becomes a new apprentice to Barber Dan.
Anonymous
3/29/18, 4:58 AM
Awesome! Loved it! Chapter 2 maybe? :P
Mar 13, 2018
Anonymous
3/29/18, 4:43 AM
They all graduated from the naval acedemy together? Capt, Lt cmdr, and COB - which is an enlisted sailor. I will continue to read and block their back stories.
Anonymous
3/29/18, 4:10 AM
Hot! Humorous, as well!!
3/29/18, 2:46 AM
Have loved this story for years. Tank's transformation is a fave
Anonymous
3/29/18, 2:43 AM
Fuck yeah!
LongtimeFan
3/29/18, 2:30 AM
Great story! Love the transformation element, especially the mental one. I do have one question, though! At the beginning, our narrator’s uncle tells him that the spell will last “roughly an hour.” Does that mean the person becomes super-suggestible for only one hour, or that all of the magical changes will go away after an hour, too? I hope not! :D
DD
3/29/18, 12:17 AM
How the mighty have fallen, poor Jake, though he needed to get knocked down a peg or two. Good story.
nycboot
3/28/18, 9:20 PM
Belial visited Rafael in chapter 4. From all appearances it seems as if Rafael is on the "good" side - although I wouldn't think that includes intercourse. Despite the white wings, I keep hoping this Rafael is Belial (or a disciple) in disguise. We know the monastery eventually gets destroyed (hence the 19th century couple moving in) yet I hope the monks have a good time until then (maybe they really do set up a Satanic sanctuary?) So many possibilities!