Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/9/18, 10:04 PM
good
2/9/18, 9:07 PM
Thanks, guys, I appreciate the compliments! Oh and the second link for Mr. C was working last night, but apparently it no longer does. Here's another copy of it: https://typeset-beta.imgix.net/elite-daily/2017/05/08034817/logan-shirtless-gilmore-girls.jpg
Anonymous
2/9/18, 5:29 PM
Another great chapter! Thanks for keeping this up, and for keeping up an amazing pace with the updates. Probably shouldn't be finding Diamond as hot as I do - but love the character and the descriptions. Can't wait to see what he's gonna do from here.
Anonymous
2/9/18, 5:27 PM
A nice change of pace to have something written as a full story. And now readers are even more on edge waiting for the next/final chapter!
Anonymous
2/9/18, 4:16 PM
I get what others are saying, and sometimes depending on the story it can get to me, but mostly I like to focus on the changes themselves, the problem is when the only change from hero to corrupted hero is straight to gay. Would be nice to see a story like this where the hero is already gay but shy and semi-closeted and "nice" and turns into a bad boy or a slut. That said I liked this story! Would love to see a continuation where Parker bleaches his hair blond like Eddie, frequents leather bars shirtless under the symbiote leather jacket and has public sex in the bathrooms, is a bottom boy for petty criminals, becomes a lazy stoner, uses his power for selfish reasons
Anonymous
2/9/18, 3:25 PM
wow what a heavy plot chapter. Solid narrative even without the sex. Still, looking forward to the sex next chapter ;)
Anonymous
2/9/18, 12:32 PM
Can't you corrupt him without breaking or stealing antiques?
screamingmoist
2/9/18, 12:07 PM
Thanks for reading everyone! @longtimefan - it seems like they’d be annoyed when someone asks them to do something that they could do for themselves.
Anonymous
2/9/18, 10:17 AM
Great addition! Not many stories show the conflict in the controller and their desire to fix things Most of the time they are just overcome by the power and darkness and IT makes them unfeeling almighty
LongtimeFan
2/9/18, 9:23 AM
What a great continuation of the story! Having read lots of tales of complete surrender to power, it’s interesting to see a character realizing the ramifications of his errors and trying to amend them...while still getting joy out of mind control. Can’t wait to see more. Great job! :)