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Swizzington
1/15/18, 4:58 PM
Nice one.
Swizzington
1/15/18, 4:45 PM
Yeah I was confused by his friend's behavior too. The whole situation just seemed so contrived. There was a point when the narrator says, "I couldn’t believe Zane was saying these things. He had been my best friend for most of our lives. How could he just be treating me like a whore now?" and I was thinking the exact same thing. There was no real explanation for why the characters would act like that. My first thought was perhaps they had been hypnotized too? But that was never made clear in the story. First, because they seemed incredibly callous towards their friend, and inexplicably happy to have gay sex in front of each other, something men are usually very inhibited about. But also because none of them spoke at all for a very large portion of the story, when in reality I would expect they would pipe up every now and then - especially when Blaze's instructions got weirder and weirder.
horologio
1/15/18, 4:32 PM
It is the supplements, yes
Anonymous
1/15/18, 4:01 PM
This could have been a series.
Anonymous
1/15/18, 3:51 PM
Very well written I hope you continue with this .anyone else hoping it's the supplements
AeonFlux
1/15/18, 3:45 PM
Keep on writing ..... a really hot start
Anonymous
1/15/18, 3:26 PM
This series is awesome
Ruffcub
1/15/18, 3:23 PM
Interesting idea but the writing style’s a bit robotic and there’s no pay off after the build up which leaves it all a bit flat.
Anonymous
1/15/18, 3:11 PM
More please. I hunger
screamingmoist
1/15/18, 2:56 PM
@bleuboy - I didn’t see that one yet. It looked cool, but the main actor in that movie drives me crazy (in the bad way).