Recent Comments

12/8/17, 8:55 PM
Good story. Please do continue this. I usually can't stand military stories because it's obvious that the writer almost never knows anything about the real military. This story was at least believable in that context. One nit to pick - it would be an Article 15, not an Article 47. UCMJ Article 47 is failure to appear or testify, while 15 is non-judicial punishment.
Anonymous
12/8/17, 7:25 PM
I like the differences between the two, personally. Looking forward to the next installment!
12/8/17, 7:25 PM
Such a HOT story....... keep on writing more of that
LongtimeFan
12/8/17, 6:03 PM
INCREDIBLE! It reminds me of some of Hypnothrill’s (my favorite author here) work—the brainwashing, the muscle growth, the gradual dumbing down...Hot, Hot, Hot. Thanks for a great story! :)
Anonymous
12/8/17, 5:53 PM
This story was really hot, but I was hoping Brad and Joe would end up as a sexy slutty couple in a really open relationship. And I was hoping the gay friends would grow big curvy bodies too but not lose any intelligence.
Anonymous
12/8/17, 5:35 PM
Wow Well written Great story Excellent details Thanks
Boon
12/8/17, 4:47 PM
Ths story is good and well written, but I feel bad for Brad, he just wanted to be a good friend. Too unfair that he ended up like that. Wouldn't be so unfair if Jorge, Garrett and Trevor share his fate, and are turned into dumb sluts too.
12/8/17, 3:32 PM
Yeah, if they became a matching pair of guys with huge asses and pecs it would be great. Take the story where you want it to go though Andyrew36.
12/8/17, 3:24 PM
A great second chapter! Great descriptions of their changing bodies and the seamless way reality shifts! I love their confusion just after things change!
Sieg
12/8/17, 12:55 PM
Dang! I loved the story! Wish there was a place like that here in Houston!