Recent Comments

1/4/18, 9:32 PM
I detected just a hint that Tim might not have as much control as he thinks - fab twist if so!
Danny
1/4/18, 9:31 PM
God I want to be Paul's hypno-son. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 9:28 PM
wish this story would go further I LOVE IT
Danny
1/4/18, 9:21 PM
OMG I so wish I could be a hypno-brother in this extended family! SO hot!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:52 PM
What about other mythical creatures - the Tooth Fairy? The Easter Bum...er Bunny! Jack Skellington at Halloween... An Ent on Arbor Day... the list could go on....
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:38 PM
I like the physical changes - well described! Freckles are an interesting additional - beyond the usual huge pecs and butt.
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:36 PM
well done, unexpected reversal where the "victim" is actually the instigator.
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:11 PM
Well written revenge story - chilling and thrilling at the same time! No one will steal from Mr. Roberts without paying dearly! Love the disproportionate muscle growth. Very sexy!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 6:54 PM
Well written, good atmosphere of dread on the part of the protagonist. I'm not a fan of muscle theft and cock shrinkage. I much prefer the reverse, but this was well written.
Anonymous
1/4/18, 6:50 PM
Good description of both the physical and mental changes. Well written and compelling. Just different enough to still be a bit of an unexpected ending.