Recent Comments

11/19/17, 2:44 AM
Just like Victor Hugo - introduce a gripping event at the end of the chapter. :) Your descriptions are really wonderful - the one in chapter 1 about the estate and its moat - so simple and executed with such simplicity. And you know how to control it so that the pace of the story never gets bogged down with excessive description. You must really be a professional writer - your style is too good. :)
Anonymous
11/19/17, 1:54 AM
Yes yes yes
Anonymous
11/19/17, 12:16 AM
Wait, where is the chapter 3?
Tox
11/18/17, 9:36 PM
As I always feel after reading one of your stories, WELL DONE! I was actually able to visualize the scenes happening extremely well. Love your stories Orrin, was sad to see a drought for a while, but glad to see you're still writing :)
Anonymous
11/18/17, 9:17 PM
Fantastic! Just keeps getting better and better!
Nov 9, 2017
Anonymous
11/18/17, 8:28 PM
Amazing!!! 😍😍😍
11/18/17, 6:53 PM
Yup. Working on Chapter 3 now. Should hopefully get a bunch of it done today and tomorrow :)
Anonymous
11/18/17, 6:43 PM
very nice story. the pacing is a little slow
LockedInIL
11/18/17, 3:57 PM
This story is SOOOOO hot!!!
nyjogger4e
11/18/17, 3:01 PM
Love this story! Slow, incremental domination is so much better than instant control. Perhaps introduce a concerned friend of Timmy's and begin his takedown. We would get to enjoy another victim's path to submission.