Recent Comments

xORRiNx
11/16/17, 5:49 AM
@hauntedskin: I hear what you're saying about time/form/tempo. I myself was so caught up in the visuals that I neglected some narrative structure of some detail. I do wanna write more controversial topics - and keep them as a whole story when posted to avoid long waits. I realized I despise cliffhangers. :P
Anonymous
11/16/17, 5:41 AM
Woof! More please
11/16/17, 5:31 AM
I love your writings in general, but this almost seems too... safe? I'm so used to you creating controversy by making more original stories that it's weird to see one that I would imagine won't create much drama at all, if any. Though perhaps you're just sick of being the resident "controversial author"; I wouldn't blame you. I thought it was still good though, although I'll admit the scene with the words was hot, but I do kind of wish you'd been more vague about the amount of time that passed. Like maybe having the protagonist muse something like "was is minutes, hours... weeks? It felt like it just went on forever, and I became more and more lost in the words and the sensations my body was feeling, almost to the point where I didn't even realise at first when it felt like someone touched my cock", or whatever. Just my thoughts really.
Anonymous
11/16/17, 4:57 AM
Wow! That was a hot start!
Anonymous
11/16/17, 4:05 AM
Really good! Loved the dumbing down of the language.
xORRiNx
11/16/17, 4:05 AM
@stinkpig 'Me' has the potential for updates in the coming months. ;)
Anonymous
11/16/17, 3:18 AM
I’m really liking where this is going
xORRiNx
11/16/17, 2:50 AM
Thanks all!! This is my favorite genre 😊
Anonymous
11/16/17, 2:42 AM
Love this man, thanks!
Anonymous
11/16/17, 2:37 AM
Yes yes yes yes