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10/13/25, 12:20 AM
This story is incredibly hot! I'm eager to read what other changes the other nerds will suffer. Also, I'd love to know what other unflattering features the formerly handsome jocks are acquiring. I'm curious that you mentioned this shy nerd got perfect teeth, which implies he had the opposite before... so that feature went somewhere else, right?

10/17/25, 8:36 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Thanks! I hadn't thought too much about those three other than as setup to get here. I'm past the halfway point now of where I originally expected to go. Maybe I'll have enough in me to revisit those dudes.
10/13/25, 1:22 AM
Wow, you'd think I'd be immune to transformation stories by this point, but this one really hit all my buttons. Nice work!

10/17/25, 8:34 PM
@[Cris Kane](/user/show/38728) Thank you! They still get me too. haha. Love your stories.
So hot
10/17/25, 6:37 PM
Part 2 please!
10/17/25, 4:55 PM
It seems like its being set up that the dad's big client is the company producing the Oby. So, he won't drug the dad just to make him accept Toby and Gabe, not to just to satisfy his lust, not just all the reasons he has considered so far, but because he needs him to get into the drug company, find out if there can be a cure, and stop the dissemination of the drug. All so noble, all so well intentioned. But the best way to get Oby to stick, is to fuck it into his brain of course, and while he is there, may as well let him know his sons already serve his new master, just get everyone on the same page. Also, its a bit odd how its seeming more and more like Oby is a big PR campaign against gay guys. Thats a lot of effort and hate that needs to get ironed out from the top if this problem is going to be fixed.
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10/16/25, 10:57 PM
Cool so the sequel is just never coming. Great.

10/17/25, 4:35 PM
@Anonymous No need to be salty about it, but I'll admit it's taken me too long for the next chapters. Problem is I was stuck with certain key elements of the story, I'm brushing details on the next scene so it doesn't feel forced.
10/17/25, 4:30 PM
We are so close to the climax! And while I can definitely sympathize with Jamie, he strikes me as being stubbornly difficult. Jamie already gave in and became Master's latest drone. Makes me feel sorry for Dusk. Jamie has so much anger in him. And probably tied into that mental damn in his psyche. So taking the collar should just be a formality. Yet his resistance is going to cause so many problems. Both Kane and Jamie need an attitude adjustment. Kane needs to get humbled. And Jamie needs to get that rod out of his ass. He just had a pleasant get together with Dusk and now he is being all stuck up to him.
10/17/25, 4:14 PM
I need more of this! But please don't make him fem.
10/17/25, 3:53 PM
I really hope the dad falls into the harem too Great chapter, the plot is getting deeper than I thought:O
10/17/25, 2:53 PM
This has been an incredible series so far. It hits on a lot of things that get me going. Preppy, obedience, chastity, brainwashing. It’s incredibly well written too. Hope this goes on for many more chapters!
10/17/25, 1:47 PM
Thank you for continuing!!! Cant wait for more of Viktor! Also austin getting curious about getting fucked