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Anonymous
11/13/17, 11:25 AM
Great to see Coach's love to the players!!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 10:32 AM
Please let the dad be hypnotized before everyone else!!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 10:20 AM
Great, can't wait to read the rest.
Nov 12, 2017
Anonymous
11/13/17, 5:09 AM
How he ended up in this mist intrigues me!! Great story! Loved it!!
Anonymous
11/12/17, 6:19 PM
It’s so obvious Grant is a beta who obvious loves and worships his Dad even without any hypnosis. I can’t wait to see how that turns out! — and he has older brothers too?! Wow.
Nov 12, 2017
gaycub
11/12/17, 2:43 PM
awesome story .
Nov 12, 2017
11/12/17, 1:54 PM
great story
Anonymous
11/12/17, 10:48 AM
That's why I love your stories so much Edlam! Making these hunks and dad's and authorities do things like it's normal. I find that so hot as well. Please make it rain with chapters! Can't wait for chapter 2 and all other chapters
Anonymous
11/12/17, 10:01 AM
It got a little to dark for what I normally Expect from Erotica. Still, It was very good. Very Descriptive and overall a complete story. I find it amusing that this works very well as a gay erotica but also works well as a horror story on its own. You have a talent for making likable Protagonists and Making them suffer in twisted and sick yet erotic ways.
11/12/17, 8:47 AM
As Robin said, for me, I find hypno most erotic when someone is made to do something they never ever would have done before...not only made to do it, but to want to do it and make them think it's normal. That control is very sexy. That said, it's only sexy when in the realm of fantasy. Most everything I write about would disgust me if it happened in real life, especially incest. If I knew someone was trying to make me be intimate in the way my characters are with their family, I'd be beyond disgusted. But when it's word on a page (or screen!), there's no harm in it. Beyond that, I did tag it with 'incest' so people really opposed to it can avoid it if need be. And, just so you know, if you really don't like incest, I'd steer clear of Chapter 3 ;)