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10/18/24, 1:31 AM
Intriguing developments; beyond a simple mind control story. It is sophisticated yet honest like the main character.
10/18/24, 1:18 AM
So sad that Author can't keep a story going this looked like it was going to be good but than they stopped writing.
10/17/24, 11:28 PM
I know this one was a mixed bag in terms of response, but I’m really enjoying this series and hope you continue it! Always a fan of good costume TFs around this time of year, and these have definitely been hitting the spot!
10/17/24, 11:13 PM
oooooo damn GOOD!!
Anonymous
10/17/24, 11:06 PM
Wow, luv it!
10/17/24, 6:07 PM
So fucking intense, can’t wait for the next installment🔥🔥

10/17/24, 10:22 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Thanks I spent a lot of time on this one. Taking swizz’s handbook idea and making something I hope is fun and interesting
fan
10/16/24, 6:24 PM
reread this again; sometimes I wonder what if jake and dave's bodies are linked up in the end. it turns out that they were united after all as alpha and beta in service of the administrator though i am unsure if the administrator would choose that decision willfully; would it consciously let them?

10/17/24, 9:19 PM
@fan I remember when writing "Brain Feed", I always had a feeling that Dave had some power of suggestion in being paired up with Jacob. That he gave a recommendation, and that suggestion was for Jacob to become a beta drone, and the two of them be paired together. I mean if the drones become the eyes and ears and sensors, then the Administrator does need to be a little receptive to what the drones are perceiving. So I remember thinking that Dave would have suggested that he be paired with Jacob. Then of course, the facility would do an in-depth analysis whether this would benefit their goals. Would Dave and Jacob's DNA create powerful hybrid clones? Would Jacob be a suitable beta drone, or is he better suited as an Alpha? After the analysis was conducted, the facility determined that Dave was correct in his observation and carried out the drone's suggestion. Whether there was an emotional or logical purpose behind Dave's suggestion ... that's for the reader to determine. I remember, when I wrote the original Brain Feed, that I always liked the idea that Dave could assert some control ... or have some minor influence over the Administrator. Or maybe, in a way, a man could make a suggestion: "Jacob would be more receptive to our goals if you pair us up; me as the Alpha, him as the beta." Even though I had this idea when writing, I just couldn't incorporate it into the story. Everything is told from Jacob's perspective. And there was no way for me to show the reader what Dave was thinking internally.
10/17/24, 8:52 PM
Simply fantastic! From the first to the last sentence. Hot as fuck and wholesome at the same time. And probably one of the best written bottom slut boy I've ever seen. So relatable...
10/5/24, 7:00 PM
Another exciting--and incredibly hot--installment! :fire: So what are the Fiends up to that they need to recruit promising young (and cute) chemists? Elijah's recruitment of Nick was awesome! Ingratiating himself into Nick's life after a "random" encounter on campus, then sedating him with his sneaker smell, finally putting him to sleep with chloroform, and carrying him over his shoulder. Wow! That really hit all my buttons! I have to agree with Glennyboi. I was never really that into sneakers before this story. But now I think it's pretty hot. As always, can't wait for the next chapter to see where this most excellent story is heading.

10/8/24, 3:52 AM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) Glad you liked it :blush: I have to admit, I've been wondering how exactly to introduce Elijah since chapter 6... Originally, he was supposed to be straight up evil, but writing this chapter, I realized I want to try making him more human, perhaps even redeemable. Combining my love for sneakers with my chloroform kidnapping fantasies always feels a bit strange, like trying to go in two separate directions at the same time.. As for the next chapter, I just finished it and it should be up in a few days :blush:

10/17/24, 7:32 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Any idea when the next chapter will get posted? As always, really looking forward to it!

10/17/24, 8:36 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) I'm very sorry for the long wait.. the next chapter has been delayed due to the site updating its rules. Chloroform is no longer on the table and I've had to change all my stories accordingly. I'm hoping the next chapter will be eligible to publish soon. :frowning:
10/17/24, 1:29 PM
Is part two going well?

10/17/24, 3:35 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Haha not really! I've been busy with a huge project (commission) which is nearly complete!

10/17/24, 3:51 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Nice, looking forward to both and the orc story