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johnnyadams
9/26/17, 5:34 AM
That's a true love kind of ending right there.
Anonymous
9/26/17, 4:58 AM
Nice story. I really like the aspect of "free will/ choice." It just feels a lot more real when the characters get to make a decision, and fully knows what is going on. I really like this transformation, and also the obedience...
Anonymous
9/26/17, 4:53 AM
Will there be more to this?
Anonymous
9/26/17, 3:27 AM
sounds like more chapters could be read.
Anonymous
9/26/17, 2:49 AM
Hot story man
Anonymous
9/26/17, 1:56 AM
Looking forward to more of your stories.
paisagringo
9/25/17, 11:20 PM
I'm thinking about doing a sequel of some sort to this one, not sure on the specifics as of yet. I like Cesar (wish I was him). It would be legit to see where he ends up and who he meets down the road. We will see where my week takes me. :)
paisagringo
9/25/17, 11:03 PM
Thanks all. Appreciate your words a lot. I write to relax from really shitty days :P
Anonymous
9/25/17, 8:08 PM
Awesome.
Anonymous
9/25/17, 5:59 PM
Excelente, muy bueno! dime que la historia continuará, es muy buena. m gusta como empiezan a degradar a Hector y no le molestan cosas como que le llamen putita. Ojalá haya mas Dummheit!!