Recent Comments

anonymous
11/7/17, 3:49 AM
I've gotta ask: Did you pick the name "Theodore Giesler" because it's almost identical to "Theodore Geisel" (aka Dr Seuss)?
LongtimeFan
11/7/17, 2:02 AM
What a great second chapter! I like how you make the victims into jerks—shows that “Master”’still has a conscience despite having amazing powers. But what will the increased pleasure do? Cliffhangers are fun! Keep up the fantastic work! :)
Anonymous
11/7/17, 1:08 AM
Nice! Curious to see what’s going to happen with the Jason bit, or is he permanently gone?
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:33 PM
Hot! I love Rick's makeover.
Viridescent
11/6/17, 6:35 PM
My theory is that mike is the devil.
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:44 AM
Any chance to see the next chapter?
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:40 AM
Thanks EdIam!
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:25 AM
Please let Jared have a happy end...
Anonymous
11/6/17, 7:29 AM
Halloween is over but it is still hot. A smart move to make a twist using hypnosis narrative. Wish you could introduce someone not under the influence of coach, share with readers how their plays look like from the outside and intervene. Hopefully Coach will jock him, too : )
Anonymous
11/6/17, 12:23 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter!