Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/12/17, 6:09 PM
I don't see what the big fuss is. We come here for erotic stories about men being mentally manipulated, used, some remained sober while it happened, most went down unwillingly, all immoral entertainment done in fantasy, is it really that much worse if a boy is 17 year old instead of 18? Hell, some stories even had the underaged characters being the abusing force (like ones written by Webb025), how would you categorize that? Conventional 18+ is just a regulation made to prevent early pregnancy for dependents, not a law made base on moral. I think limits set to age 15+ would be fine, kids at that time are fully aware of sexual tension and they are physiologically mature enough to reproduce.
9/12/17, 4:45 PM
Great Story! I'm glad Lin didn't stay permanently dumbed down although that aspect was hot.The ending was super. Lin gets what he wants and he has Jack as well who has him.
Sep 7, 2017
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9/12/17, 2:29 PM
Loved it!
Anonymous
9/12/17, 2:13 PM
Honestly the best story I've read so far. The development of the characters, how you displayed their thought processes, and the climax and resolution made it fantastic. Lin's volition made the story all the more better. I hope that you continue writing!
Anonymous
9/12/17, 1:35 PM
Great job! Thanks so much. What about a story were Kyle try to look for Jack wanting to become a Jock boy? I think first story doesn't have an enough happy ending :-)
JamieTi684
9/12/17, 10:47 AM
:D I love it! This was a great story H.E., we're all looking forward to more!
Anonymous
9/12/17, 10:04 AM
Really really hope you finish this series. It's one of my favourites and it takes a lot to impress me.
Anonymous
9/12/17, 5:37 AM
Very nice work! Loved the ending.
Anonymous
9/12/17, 5:05 AM
Honestly, this story holds up well on its own without the sex. You have excellent character development, great insight into the character's mind, and a beautiful transition. It was very well done, and I applaud you for it. I prefer to skip the sex, myself, and did so here, but I love a good hypnosis conversion.
Anonymous
9/12/17, 4:17 AM
Great way to make it a happy ending. We still enjoyed a dumbing down : )