Recent Comments

8/31/25, 8:26 PM
This just gets better and better! I’m loving every moment of the story and can’t wait to see what happens next!
8/31/25, 3:35 PM
I love this story and I've only seen part 1 because I see you've released a part 2, which I'll be promptly reading. Your writing is so good and you've set the scene so well - I feel like I've gotten a cultural education. Excited to see your other stories!

8/31/25, 8:21 PM
@[All about the eyes](/user/show/332807) Thank you! Part one was originally a stand-alone so I put a lot of effort into it. I put a ton into part 2 as well, but I fear part 1 may be difficult to live up to. Hopefully I met it halfway at least :)
8/30/25, 2:28 PM
What a pleasant surprise to see more of this amazingly hot story!! I'd love to continue seeing Simon completely mindfucked to oblivion :P

8/30/25, 6:15 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I hope you enjoyed! Let me know if you have any suggestions ⭐️

8/31/25, 3:40 PM
@[Trancinator 5000](/user/show/10061213) Definitely inserting more fantasies into Simon that he can’t fathom why he wants it. Keeping him fully straight, but craving his buddies cock. Making him turned on by sneakily groping his bud, making him confused why his cock is harder for him then it’s ever been for any woman, feeling the need to stay shirtless and show off his body for his bud…possibilities are endless.

8/31/25, 8:12 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Yes! This is definitely the path I’ve been trying to steer them into. I need to make sure the main character is keeping Simon mostly in-tact besides a few tweaks here and there, I love him being surprised by what feels like his own choices and feelings.
Aug 31, 2025
8/31/25, 7:22 PM
I really enjoyed this story. Neat writing style too.

KKA
8/31/25, 7:55 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Thanks so much!! That means a lot, man!
8/31/25, 7:06 PM
I'm loving this story so far. Perhaps he accidently makes himself cum or such things :-)
8/31/25, 6:51 PM
Great Ideas, great writing, great story so far. Please keep writing. I love this story and hope that the next part will be coming soon.
Aug 31, 2025
8/31/25, 5:46 PM
Great story! Loved the baseball player scene. How much do those windows cost, exactly??? I'll take a dozen of them!
Anonymous
8/31/25, 4:51 PM
Why this chapter is too short, hope the next chapter soon
8/31/25, 3:30 PM
Absolutely loving everything about this series!
8/31/25, 3:12 PM
Oh my god this is hot. And hmmm, i could see the breadcrumbs lining up. Its not only Oby connects these stories. Very interesting. Cant wait for next weeks entry.