Recent Comments

Jeux
8/6/17, 4:47 AM
The story is starting to feel like a soap to me, I guess that's why people start to lose interests. You went from one story line to three, five pairs of master-slave to countless pairs, plus family members. It's too many characters for a scene-focusing erotica. In the beginning, the story is about freshman nerds mind control older jocks. People attracted to that topic might not be attracted to teacher enslaving students. If the story started as plot-focusing it might work.
Anonymous
8/6/17, 4:00 AM
The Ginger scene bones me hard and makes me want to be his pup also..thank you
Anonymous
8/6/17, 3:31 AM
Would that every critic tried their hand at crafting a story?
Anonymous
8/6/17, 1:35 AM
always enjoy hot cigar stories
Anonymous
8/6/17, 12:42 AM
"Bumsex" is also very British so it seemed to fit the story just fine.
Anonymous
8/5/17, 11:45 PM
Such a hot story. Love your transformations.
Aug 4, 2017
lipsk
8/5/17, 11:09 PM
loved it
Aug 4, 2017
8/5/17, 11:08 PM
Granted I don't know how the rules of the spell work, but given that he said it twice at the beginning, I'm guessing he'll be in Dylan's body for at least another day. And as usual I love your work xORRiNx and the variety you bring to the site.
8/5/17, 11:03 PM
Honestly my only gripe is how rushed the sex scene at the end felt. Everything else was well paced, and I liked the descriptions.
TrevorTist
8/5/17, 8:41 PM
As a fellow fan of DannydaLionKing's story, I really loved this one. I hope you will continue New in Town. It is one of my favorites.