Recent Comments

7/31/25, 12:46 PM
It was incredible and I absolutely loved it. I also absolutely hated how much I wanted him to just destroy and corrupt his brother and leave Andrew a kinky slutty mess. Which says a lot about myself I suppose. I guess I am more Pat or even worse then I am an Ari. Lol. Either way please just keep up the excellent writing. My cock and I greatly look forward to your next story or continuation of this one.
7/31/25, 11:09 AM
You have a decent setup for a story, but you needed to put in a lot less time into actually developing the characters and story. I don't think you needed to do so much about the details about aquisition, the backstory of prostitution recently passing, company crime and stuff like that. I hope you do expand on this, but if not this has been a bit of a case of runnaway scenario setup. I can't say I like the characters too much but I'm sure that will develop soon enough. Please keep going and actually write this story
7/31/25, 10:45 AM
hot story, maybe mind control too easy. And please not "siamo in accordo" but "siamo d'accordo"?
Anonymous
7/25/25, 5:51 PM
So hot! A fantasy I had for some time but didn't read a story about. Any way I can contact you to talk?) Thanks for the story!

7/31/25, 10:33 AM
@Anonymous I am so happy you like it! I plan to upload more stories. Sure, we can connect.
7/31/25, 7:09 AM
With each chapter…want to be Thor so badly…woof!
7/31/25, 6:36 AM
I don't quite understand how the body and personality of a predatory snake like Kaa could be so sexy and arousing. But Kaa is so entertaining that being eaten by him all while being tranced, teased, squeezed, edged, and ejaculated seems like the perfect way to go. Personally i think i would enjoy vore so much better if i could be Kaa's prey over and over without actually being consumed. Praise be to Twan Andersen to come as close as possible to making this happen!
7/30/25, 3:53 PM
This is really good. love a slow burn

7/31/25, 3:16 AM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) Thank you.
7/30/25, 9:32 AM
Love a hot, detailed submission!

7/31/25, 3:16 AM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) Thanks!
7/30/25, 4:32 PM
I've been enjoying this series and reading his descent. Yet there is a distinction I need made clear. This whole time 'John' had been molding the protagonist to be more like a man. Yet simultaneously encouraging him to be a good boy. His good boy. To be submissive to him. So being a man and being the boy should be mutually exclusive. Would your please clarify?

7/30/25, 9:10 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Masculine = man, physical Submissiveness = boy, mental Jonathan is developing two threads that are woven together. An appreciation and desire for masculinity, but also Jake is being twisted to enjoy submission. The two aren't mutually exclusive here

7/31/25, 3:12 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Hey, thanks for the comment. The contrast is very much intentional. Like Buster Red said, “real man” and “good boy” represent different layers, masculinity on the surface, submission underneath. John is reshaping Jake into his man, one who embodies his masculine ideals, but all reframed through obedience. Calling him “good boy” reinforces the power hierarchy and John’s superiority, no matter how ‘manly’ Jake becomes. It’s a controlled duality, strength bent entirely to John’s will.

7/31/25, 3:15 AM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) Thanks a ton, man. You put it perfectly. That duality is exactly what I was aiming for. Appreciate the support.
Anonymous
7/31/25, 2:12 AM
Incredible! Can't wait for the next chapter.