Recent Comments

Jakefox500@yahoo.com
7/19/17, 10:50 AM
Hey guys i have finilly managed to get logged back into my account :) and was just wondering if people would like me to continue my little story of Robs downfall from hot shot lawyer to groverling slave?
Politics Politics
7/19/17, 9:02 AM
Might have been a good story if it were not for the political nonsense.
Anonymous
7/19/17, 9:01 AM
How about the next stage where he is turned into a big, fat, greasy, middle aged arab?
Anonymous
7/19/17, 8:53 AM
You as the writer must enjoy writing it first. :3 That said, I commented before that the reason I enjoyed this story was because of the theme of "masters" ordering the "slaves" to humiliate them. While that part derailed a bit in Chapter 2 (I do love Master Guerrilla's family scene), you drew it back in Chapter 3, all is well now. :)
Anonymous
7/19/17, 4:31 AM
It's been fantastic. More please.
UchihaDEMS
7/19/17, 4:21 AM
I think the story jumped the shark since chapter 1 and went to the moon in chapter 2. I love it.
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:51 AM
This is amazing!!!!
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:51 AM
I love this so much! Keep it up!!!
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:31 AM
That was outstanding----it just built and built and the descriptions were most vivid.
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:20 AM
Sage advice. Write, edit, re-edit, let the story simmer, re-visit, re-edit, and then post. Write what you enjoy writing. Of course, twists and surprises are always fun to read, but keep your mind happy and active.