Recent Comments

10/12/24, 4:44 AM
I'm back! I'm sorry for disappearing so suddenly, but I finally found some time to finish this story. I hope you like the endings I prepared! As always, I'm accepting any constructive feedback. And I also really want to know which ending you liked the most.

Zander
10/14/24, 12:10 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Thank you very much for continuing this story. It was worth the wait) I liked that you took the concept (idea) of two endings of the story, which allows readers to look at and read the story from a different angle and ask the question What if...? I hope that in your other stories endings with two endings will happen often, as with other authors of this website. Personally, I really liked the ending with the victory of Solaris, where he turned the villain Nemesis into his personal slave and left Jack the same
10/14/24, 12:08 AM
You might call this a bad end, but at least everyone seems to be pretty happy! I'm glad you're continuing this series.
10/13/24, 11:34 PM
Please don’t let this one die, it had really developed into something very hot with a lot of potential.
10/13/24, 10:37 PM
so happy to see a new chapter! keep up the good work!
10/13/24, 9:23 PM
I felt bad for Johnny
10/13/24, 9:05 PM
I think I'm going to be coming back to this one
10/13/24, 8:36 PM
Love this reimagination and love your writing, can't wait for more!

10/13/24, 9:03 PM
@[andromeda](/user/show/1014145) Thank you 🥹🥹 I really appreciate it!
10/13/24, 7:54 PM
I can’t wait to see where this goes.
Oct 8, 2024
10/13/24, 6:14 PM
Very hot read

Elm
10/13/24, 7:34 PM
@[Behr](/user/show/1886592) Thank you :smile:
10/13/24, 4:19 PM
I think this ending was my favourite. I did enjoy aspects of the other ending though, like the loving relationship between Solaris and Nemesis. Perhaps my ideal ending would’ve been Solaris submitting and retaining his personality while being in a relationship with Nemesis.