Recent Comments

Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 5:17 PM
Disregard my last comment (would delete it but don't see how to do so). I've been working on the final instalment (the epilogue) and was thinking (illogically) that you were referencing things that happen there. Oops. Drop me a note (if you like) and let me know where you think it went wrong (where he sounded too intelligent). Feedback is always appreciated.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 5:09 PM
Well, he was meant to be smart there at the end for a few minutes... but assuming you don't mean that part. :-)
Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 2:40 PM
Great story! Loved it!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 2:09 PM
I didn't expect a sequel. It is amazing and hot. Love you!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 1:44 PM
Love these conversation part, still we could see the protagonist's personality. I'd love to see how he interacted with teammates, or even Caleb, after Coach installed Bradley a rough tough tight end persona. Looking forward to see you reveal Coach's evil secret, which you reveal gradually and we are all aware of. Thanks a lot for keeping posting!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 1:08 PM
Loved it, but he sounds too smart
Anonymous
6/24/17, 12:46 PM
I'd love to know what Johnny typed in the laptop to get Vince to be his gay lover
Anonymous
6/24/17, 12:32 PM
Loved it!
Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 11:13 AM
Terrific story...terrific photos!!
Jun 22, 2017
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 11:00 AM
I'm thinking about writing a sequel set on Valhalla-14. I just need to make sure that it doesn't seem too repetitive, so I've been mulling over how I want to structure the scenes. Glad that you guys are enjoying this! I should have more sci-fi stories on the way this summer, including my take on "Invasion of the Body Snatchers."