Recent Comments

Rider Vitalli
6/16/17, 1:16 AM
Thank you!! Means alot! Yeah, having to convert it a bit to fit this site's guidelines, and doing so in the last 10 minutes at work definitely left it a bit of a rush job. Duly noted for next time! Thanks for the advice as well, always nice to get constructive criticism ^_^ helps writers improve!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 1:09 AM
Hot story! Love the theme of being made into an extreme stereotype of a Man by force! Minor criticism: A tiny loss of continuity when you made the main character 18. (Good call btw) I think you might have maintained the same story spirit as your cyoc original by making the party-goers college seniors, and perhaps add more color around how 'undeveloped' the 18 year old was when he started. Other than that it was great!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 12:58 AM
Amazing story. I'm a big fan of this ☺️
rubberdrone
6/16/17, 12:21 AM
I'm eager to hear about the drone's experience and conversion!
Anonymous
6/15/17, 9:44 PM
@TandySensation: is that sarcasm or seriousness? You start off saying the story is great but then rip right into it. Also, anyone can edit the tags. If you feel a rape tag is called for, you can just add one yourself.
Anonymous
6/15/17, 9:41 PM
Growing up in shadows of the city it rings in memories also .the part where he scans brain for memories has me wondering why . Overall great series so far Willie hope there is more Would like a real good twist in reasons these goomba's where chosen
6/15/17, 9:33 PM
Great story thanks!!
TandySensation
6/15/17, 9:26 PM
Great story. The ending was confusing and abrupt. All of a sudden, La'mar and Darnell's awkward encounter turned into nonconsensual intercourse. I started imagining... "Wow. Now La'mar will have to come to terms with being raped, in addition to turning black. The story can't end with rape, so I guess in chapter 5, La'mar will finally grow into a real three-dimensional member of a black gay community. Oh nevermind, he likes being raped. {cums}" Please add a tag for "rape," so as not to confuse impressionable young virgins that might think saying "no" to sex doesn't count if deep down, your body "wants it."
Anonymous
6/15/17, 9:02 PM
You're British, aren't you?
Anonymous
6/15/17, 8:41 PM
take me ... make me yours ...