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Anonymous
6/11/17, 12:23 AM
Vinnie, Paulie and Dino -- sounds like the Goombah Hot Guys Network.
Anonymous
6/10/17, 11:17 PM
Love studs!!
Anonymous
6/10/17, 10:50 PM
It's a nice twist as the protagonist is willingly to submit himself to Coach's control while he has no choice. Love the way you show the protagonist's good personality, showing the interactions with his parents. I hope he become an arrogant and cocky jock, a totally different person.
Anonymous
6/10/17, 8:50 PM
NB first sentence. "Came too" = also came, "came to" = regained consciousness
Anonymous
6/10/17, 8:11 PM
Awesome work!!
Anonymous
6/10/17, 7:10 PM
great story!!
Anonymous
6/10/17, 6:59 PM
Loved the story! Please consider writing a longer version! I absolutely loved the premise/reality shift based on insults
Anonymous
6/10/17, 3:28 PM
amazing job . Hope we get something similar
Anonymous
6/10/17, 2:03 PM
Fantastic
TimNJ
6/10/17, 9:59 AM
Another hot story but if you dont mind me asking did you use a subway map or what? The actual name of the stop is New Utrecht Ave and that's the next stop after my own; so besides being in my mind, your stories are now in my neighborhood! You were spot on with Vinnie, Paulie and the Puerto Rican neighbor. Add some Middle Eastern or Asian men for your next installment and you'll have really all the men in the neighborhood covered lol.