Recent Comments

7/30/25, 4:32 PM
I've been enjoying this series and reading his descent. Yet there is a distinction I need made clear. This whole time 'John' had been molding the protagonist to be more like a man. Yet simultaneously encouraging him to be a good boy. His good boy. To be submissive to him. So being a man and being the boy should be mutually exclusive. Would your please clarify?

7/30/25, 9:10 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Masculine = man, physical Submissiveness = boy, mental Jonathan is developing two threads that are woven together. An appreciation and desire for masculinity, but also Jake is being twisted to enjoy submission. The two aren't mutually exclusive here

7/31/25, 3:12 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Hey, thanks for the comment. The contrast is very much intentional. Like Buster Red said, “real man” and “good boy” represent different layers, masculinity on the surface, submission underneath. John is reshaping Jake into his man, one who embodies his masculine ideals, but all reframed through obedience. Calling him “good boy” reinforces the power hierarchy and John’s superiority, no matter how ‘manly’ Jake becomes. It’s a controlled duality, strength bent entirely to John’s will.

7/31/25, 3:15 AM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) Thanks a ton, man. You put it perfectly. That duality is exactly what I was aiming for. Appreciate the support.
Anonymous
7/31/25, 2:12 AM
Incredible! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
7/30/25, 5:33 PM
Were 178 tags actually necessary for this story? (And that is the actual number using an app to count them.)

7/31/25, 1:37 AM
@Anonymous Well considering the story doesn't use most of them the answer is probably no. But since this is his first story on here he probably didn't know how the tagging system worked and accidentally used all of them instead of selecting the ones he intended to use. I'm sure he'll fix it.

Anonymous
7/31/25, 2:11 AM
@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) That's entirely possible.
Anonymous
4/4/24, 1:31 PM
One of the best age progression stories here.

7/31/25, 1:44 AM
@Anonymous I would second that!
7/31/25, 1:41 AM
Poor Diego, but maybe he will learn to like his new self; we do. Bravo on keeping this going .
7/31/25, 1:22 AM
Love this story! Thanks for continuing it!
7/31/25, 1:10 AM
@Wisperlouder I’m so sorry I never commented on your first chapter of what is an amazing tale. Love how you handle the early transformation of Jake without the need for constant explanation of the why or how. Very hot but nice slow burn as Dale goes through his metamorphosis into a totally different man. It is thanks to the ability to look at members favourite stories that I came back to this story.
7/28/25, 8:17 AM
I hope these cahapters to be just the start of o great long series. Thanks for the story.

7/31/25, 12:30 AM
@[LTTL](/user/show/911183) I do have more **ideas** but not much time to write them. :/
7/25/25, 9:59 PM
Shot so hard when he kissed his own bicep. A++++

7/31/25, 12:22 AM
@[Woodrow Writes](/user/show/424421) Big biceps were meant to be kissed.
daretoedge
7/25/25, 2:19 PM
Nice, gradual transformation, great physical descriptions, really gets you in the cocky jock headspace. Starting each morning off with the changes in the roommate dynamic and Stiles' body (6 to 7 to 8 inches) was very hot and set the tone for each chapter.

7/31/25, 12:22 AM
@daretoedge Thanks for the comment! :D I did enjoy showing the shifting dynamic with his roommate. :3