Recent Comments

May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 3:38 PM
See that last comment, Willie. The problem with you stories of late are the pics. You assume people look at the pics. They fill in the details. That's not writing. It may be good story telling, but not writing.
May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 3:31 PM
Kinda quick and didn't explain the transformation or mind changes that happened. Definitively not won of your best.
Anonymous
5/17/17, 2:58 PM
Great Story. Change ihm someone more. Hairstyle, Piercings and tattoo.
Marvyn
5/17/17, 2:54 PM
Thank YOU dougkent60. It's comments like yours that make me keen to carry on writing.
May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 2:49 PM
Excellent story!
dougkent60
5/17/17, 1:28 PM
Awesomely hot AND well written, many writers on this site should read your work and try to emulate it. Terrific. THANK YOU
Anonymous
5/17/17, 11:55 AM
This story was so hot! I wish you could write entire novels of your stories! I'd definitely buy a book written by you.
Anonymous
5/17/17, 10:05 AM
fucking hot
Anonymous
5/17/17, 6:09 AM
that was hott!
Anonymous
5/17/17, 5:07 AM
Please cum back and write......