Recent Comments

5/13/17, 11:01 AM
This was very well written. The racist stereotype nature of the changes makes me uneasy liking this, but I justify it by thinking the reality changer was a really nasty piece of work.
5/13/17, 10:46 AM
As other have said, hot. I liked it a lot and this was definitely not too subtle. Good progression, too.
May 12, 2017
5/13/17, 10:42 AM
This was fun. More of the Captain, please.
5/13/17, 10:38 AM
Excellent writing, as usual. I liked the way you got into Hank's thoughts, and the seeming camaraderie at the house. I felt like the revelations at the end were about to fall into the commonplace, but then you mostly skirted that with sheer hotness and being enthusiastically detailed . Good work :-)
NoToTrump
5/13/17, 8:51 AM
Moar?
AeonFlux
5/13/17, 8:33 AM
You can't just stop in the middle...........how's going further ???????? What happens next ????
Anonymous
5/13/17, 8:07 AM
oh no ... so does that mean we will wait for the next chapter of the Re-Educator longer than expected >_< ??? I really miss the ginger family ...
Marvyn
5/13/17, 7:28 AM
Well here's my next attempt. Readers of 'Dominoes' will notice a few similarities, but this story is very different. I hope you enjoy it. Once again, I'm British, so while the story is set in the US, the spelling is UK English. Hope that does not jar too much with any American readers. Marvyn x
Marvyn
5/13/17, 5:35 AM
Thanks to all for the positive comments, particularly Boone - very inspiring to me that you're enjoying it so much. I've just submitted the final chapter, but it's about double the length of previous ones, so you were right. The ending also hints at a possible explanation of why Jevon has gone through this.
Marvyn
5/13/17, 5:29 AM
Well folks, this is the final chapter. I hope you enjoyed reading it. Thank you for the positive feed-back so far. Although Jevon's life is very different from how it was to start with, I think he's quite enjoying his new existence. Finally, a humble request to the editor: Could you possibly fix the 'next chapter' links now that the episodes are all in one file? I notice some of them don't work, which makes it hard for people to work through the story. Thanks!