Recent Comments

7/31/25, 1:10 AM
@Wisperlouder I’m so sorry I never commented on your first chapter of what is an amazing tale. Love how you handle the early transformation of Jake without the need for constant explanation of the why or how. Very hot but nice slow burn as Dale goes through his metamorphosis into a totally different man. It is thanks to the ability to look at members favourite stories that I came back to this story.
7/28/25, 8:17 AM
I hope these cahapters to be just the start of o great long series. Thanks for the story.

7/31/25, 12:30 AM
@[LTTL](/user/show/911183) I do have more **ideas** but not much time to write them. :/
7/25/25, 9:59 PM
Shot so hard when he kissed his own bicep. A++++

7/31/25, 12:22 AM
@[Woodrow Writes](/user/show/424421) Big biceps were meant to be kissed.
daretoedge
7/25/25, 2:19 PM
Nice, gradual transformation, great physical descriptions, really gets you in the cocky jock headspace. Starting each morning off with the changes in the roommate dynamic and Stiles' body (6 to 7 to 8 inches) was very hot and set the tone for each chapter.

7/31/25, 12:22 AM
@daretoedge Thanks for the comment! :D I did enjoy showing the shifting dynamic with his roommate. :3
7/25/25, 12:15 PM
Awesome! As a Sterek shipper I’d totally love to see Derek come investigate

7/31/25, 12:21 AM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) I also ship Sterek! I'm not sure how I would integrate Derek, tbh. I'd probably make him even bigger. 😅
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/30/25, 11:10 PM
Damn this was a good story! Oh to be Brian! Or,, as he was called in the last two chapters when he forgot his name...The boy.
7/30/25, 10:56 PM
I like the story. I want Vale to fuck Lucien hard and see a sex scene where Lucien sucks Vale's dick under the table when Adrian talks to Lucien's wife saying that now he will work for him without suspecting that he is under Vale's table). But although I like corruption, I also want everyone who was under control to be freed in the Finale and someone smarter could stop Vale once and for all!
7/30/25, 10:23 PM
Looking forward to Danny's further adventures in jail.
7/30/25, 6:31 PM
Loved this story, and would absolutely love a sequel! Great writing and themes!

7/30/25, 9:39 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Also have tons of questions about the filing cabinet/suggestions for a sequel, should there be one. Would love to discuss :)
7/30/25, 8:39 PM
your writing is fantastic. the ideas, the plot, everything is perfect. i'm loving it and I hope that there will be much more :-)