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5/19/24, 12:23 AM
Rubbrsome, I've been a big fan of your stories for a long time. One of my favorite hypno writers. The Male Order has a deeply dreamlike quality to it- an erotic nightmare. While I have my own qualms with AI art, I have to admit that the images you used in the story help contribute to the surreal, fluid tone of the story- male shapes flowing and warping in ways that are strange, but not unrecognizable. Bustard's generations capture a deeply erotic element of the transhuman, of the inhuman. My mind says no, but another part of me says "yes, yes, yes!"

5/19/24, 1:42 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Thank you for the amazing compliment. When I first stumbled across BVSTARD's images, my mind was blown. I desperately wanted to incorporate his art into one of my stories. It was simply because I had never seen imagery (from film, TV, print, photo, or any type of media) that got close to what I was envisioning inside my mind. The way you described "male shapes flowing and warping in ways that are strange ..." is a great description of that scenarios that are happening inside my imagination. And BVSTARD's art is the closest I've seen that touches my imagination. So OF COURSE I had to contact him, get permission and write a story. It wasn't hard in writing. His imagery instantly got my ideas churning. And I was very pleased with the results. I'm so glad you succumbed and have that desire to say "yes, yes, yes!"
Rayford
5/19/24, 1:42 PM
Some of you are missing the point. This is just an incredibly hot fantasy. It is not racist - it is not saying that all Arab roommates would be this way. I check for the next chapter every day. Please continue the story!
5/19/24, 1:11 PM
WOW! This is REALLY GOOD READING! I am IN!
5/19/24, 12:51 PM
That was a pleasure to read. You are a great writer!
5/18/24, 5:32 PM
OH THAT'S SUCH A GOOD STORY!! Love how you've written it, love that Blake has a conscience and I love that they get a happy ending. Amazing story. I will definetly be re-reading that one in the future.

5/19/24, 12:13 PM
@[Anonym](/user/show/1317836) Thank you! To be honest, I’m not sure he actually did develop a conscience - he didn’t actually let them go, after all. I suspect it’s more likely he was just scared about the depth of his feelings for Trent and the fact that he didn’t think they would be returned, and so pushed him away and then rationalised his behaviour by saying that it was him trying to do “the right thing”. If you’d prefer to think he has a conscience you can - once it’s published, it’s out for all to interpret.
Leo
5/18/24, 8:36 PM
Please please continue writing more chapters! This is the hottest story I’ve read on this site in a long time!! I love everything about it!

5/19/24, 12:09 PM
@[Leo](/user/show/988646) That’s very kind of you! I have a couple of paths in mind to continue this one - we may be heading back to the frat house next.
5/19/24, 10:23 AM
You are one of the best new writers on the site.:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: This was super-well written and super-sexy. I was worried about the romance aspect when the guy started as an hypnotized slave, but you really managed to make it work and belivable those two fell in love. :green_heart:

5/19/24, 12:08 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you! To be honest, I didn’t approach it thinking that it would be romantic - right up until the third scene I honestly thought it was going somewhere totally different, but the characters disagreed, I guess 😂
5/19/24, 10:44 AM
Such a wonderful story. I hope you keep making stories like this and the other story you did, "Many Names, One Name". I love how you characterize each individuals in the story.
5/19/24, 7:51 AM
Another great story! The way you write the slaves is amazing. I love how they justify what’s been done to them. I’m a fan already and hope you write more!
5/19/24, 6:41 AM
Great to see a continuation of this story and hope there's more to come! Would be interesting to see how Dave looks shrunk down to a pipsqueak chav lad apprentice. Or maybe someone comes looking for him and Bill gives them a makeover too!