Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:21 PM
That was hot!! Loved it.
Willie Cici
4/17/17, 4:20 PM
This posting is the EDITED VERSION with the ending based on the comments votes.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 1:46 PM
Please post part 2 quickly
Anonymous
4/17/17, 9:33 AM
Great first story
Anonymous
4/17/17, 6:13 AM
I loved this whole series and this was a good end to it. The only thing I wish had been different is that we'd have gotten to see Hero transformed before the Goddess's avatar took him. Into a dumb twinky himbo slut or something equally opposite of what he was. Thank you for writing such great stories, Baralai!
Apr 16, 2017
Nick Bottom
4/17/17, 6:02 AM
You can't just stop here, dude. Lol.
Apr 16, 2017
Anonymous
4/17/17, 5:39 AM
Hot. Can't wait for more.
lloyd311@aol.com
4/17/17, 3:16 AM
Glad you enjoyed the story! And yeah, I get that criticism. I'm sorry if you find the cold open "annoying." It wasn't intended to be. That scene was written out of sequence, a long time ago, and I cannot recall exactly what I was thinking at the time. But I always liked that it gave a hint of what the story was going to be about. What Tommy's angst was like. And that it gave some "hotness" before all the necessary set-up that followed. Several of the people I showed the story to before posting it made the same comment, but I still think it works. We'll see. Anyhow, many, many thanks... LLOYD
Anonymous
4/17/17, 2:51 AM
I really have to say I absolutely loved your story! I' ve been reading these kinds of stories for years (hypnosis, body swap, muscle growth etc) and it' s the first time I just HAD to make a comment! That's how much I liked it! You see it's the first time I found a gay-to-straight hypnosis/transformation story after searching through the web for years! And though I am a gay man and I guite enjoy the straight-to-gay stories, I 've read so many that they became guite boring after a while. But a gay-to-straight one that was also beautifully writen like this? Simply amazing. I do hope you continue writing, since you seem to have abandoned this. Is there any other site that you have posted the whole story or others like that? And does anybody know where can I find more gay-to-straight stories? Most of the rest in this site seem to be simply straight-to-gay that the writter erroneously tagged as gay-to-straight.
Willie Cici
4/17/17, 2:46 AM
I repaired the links. They should be working.