Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/3/24, 11:36 AM
I really loved this! I would never think it would be something I'm into, but it turned me on. Great work.
Aug 10, 2020
10/3/24, 10:36 AM
I really love this story. It's a great concept and I really enjoy the gradual progression in the edging video.
10/3/24, 9:55 AM
Wow, things have gone horribly wrong. Impressively so. Can't wait to see how tje situation will evolve. Tho, with Bobby's state becoming public, if the coach had plans to hypnotize someone else, ot will go badly too.
10/3/24, 7:22 AM
Mmmmm. Gorgeous weight gain descriptions and a surprisingly happy and sweet ending--love it! Great job! :D
Anonymous
10/3/24, 5:51 AM
Good to see you're back. When can we expect a new chapter? We need new action with the coach or reverend
10/3/24, 5:08 AM
This is earnestly just a freaking well written story!? Like, sorry to sincere-post in horny spaces, but this gave me genuine emotions! I loved the characters, dynamics, and BRILLIANT exploration of relationships at play. Write a book if you haven't yet, jeez!
10/3/24, 5:07 AM
Like the story, just don’t like a guy that has all the power and doesn’t keep his word. So he uses th whole family. I wonder if he put Jake into taking him along in his head too.
10/3/24, 4:23 AM
I liked the story but the changes, presumably retroactive, didn't have much explanation or description. It was a little hard to follow.
no
9/28/24, 4:57 AM
when's the next part

10/3/24, 4:07 AM
@no I am in the finishing stages of writing the next chapter. I hope to release it soon!
8/29/24, 9:08 AM
i would love to see another overview over triggers and co next time. makes it easier to keep track :-)

10/3/24, 4:06 AM
@[SirLees](/user/show/944611) Glad to hear your feedback on the chart. I will add it back on for the next chapter. The chart also helps me a ton as the writer; there's so many characters to remember! Note to self: less characters next time! :sweat_smile: