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TimNJ
3/1/17, 2:41 PM
Reading this was the equivalent of driving 80 miles per hour on a busy street. Or 128 kilometers per hour.
Lenny
3/1/17, 2:13 PM
Freaky. Gave me an erection. Whats going to happen next?
HypPup
3/1/17, 1:30 PM
I disagree with Hypnothrill. I don't mind the long read. I would rather the whole story then sections. I like when a story has an ending. To many times a writer will put things in sections and then things happen and readers never get an ending. Or the story starts to fall apart because the writers ideas keep coming and they all end up in the one story, as opposed to fully fleshed out ones.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 12:50 PM
Great story! Small suggestion: offer more details on what the escort program was (off ship) and what that would entail in terms of location, how he would be advertised etc.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 7:56 AM
more please
Anonymous
3/1/17, 7:32 AM
hey, if you want to read more from this author he has another series called Aquata Cove. https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/aquata-cove/
Anonymous
3/1/17, 5:22 AM
I'm intrigued.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 5:16 AM
Hypnothrill's comment is worth considering. He's an established writer on this site. Many of the other writers also use the episodic format to build excitment for the story. Long reads get tedious. Having said that -- great story. So hot. Damn!!!
Cutlerfan
3/1/17, 4:59 AM
Great story! I wonder how Dave's life turned out? No doubt another man whore.
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
3/1/17, 3:58 AM
I agree--another fantastic story! I loved the slow mental transformation. One suggestion: since you're writing such long stories, you might consider posting them in multiple installments. Readers like the anticipation of waiting for another section and imagining what will happen next to the men in the story...it gets them all hot and bothered.