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Anonymous
2/8/17, 10:59 PM
I think that this might be the one that I liked the least, but only because I would love to see it backfire on Andrew and his friends. I'm glad that you didn't have Tyler play the game, because the 'turn an intelligent straight man into a drooling idiot gay whore' is probably my biggest turn off. Though I do admit to loving having an extremely intelligent, high powered straight man turned into an extremely intelligent, high powered, secret gay sex slave. I'm interested in seeing why the game didn't move on to the next group of players and look forward to reading chapter 5. (hopefully soon?)
rcmorales9014@gmail.com
2/8/17, 10:49 PM
I really wished some of themale foot fetish sites would do the time freeze. Big fan of shows like Twilight Zone, and Meatballs 3, that did the time freeze, always said to myself alot of those hot guys would've found themselves undressed withwet sticky cum between their toes and feet. I like practicing this fantasy with male escorts from time to time.
AeonFlux
2/8/17, 10:32 PM
A perfect end to a great story .....thanx😁
Anonymous
2/8/17, 9:08 PM
Cris, xORRiNx's roommate, looked up after the remark. He’d been chilling on his laptop in bed when xORRiNx came in. “Yea but aren’t you a writer though? You’re supposed to be in there improving right along with them haha,” Cris joked.
story idea
2/8/17, 8:05 PM
Author gets revenge on his story critics by making them his victims in chapter 2
punch a nazi
2/8/17, 8:02 PM
Your either with us 100% or your wrong. You do not deserve to be a hot gay with straight buds -- that's a gay version of an Uncle Tom. You also can not say I am not a homophobic white nazi because I have a gay friend especially if he is not a woke gay. These dudes deserved it. This story rocks!!
Anonymous
2/8/17, 7:56 PM
And I forgot to list, you even got in some gym time, hypnotically compelled exercise and a personal trainer. We seem to run in the same grooves, man - so glad you're better at writing this stuff than I am. :)
Anonymous
2/8/17, 7:52 PM
Terrific work!!!
sweatnosis
2/8/17, 7:51 PM
WOW! You pushed so many of my buttons! Barbershop hypnosis (SO hotly done!), the eroticism of hands shampooing/combing/cutting your hair, sinking into a massage, relaxation/suggestibility elixers and subliminals, pit sniffing and the joy of sweat, good old classic clueless transformation and straight-to-gay... Great job! Bookmarking your author page so I don't miss anything else you do.
Blindseer
2/8/17, 7:10 PM
Another great chapter. There was an emphasis on the transformations that was missing from chapter 1, and i think it really helped. So from what i gathered, Adam committed suicide because he was gay. Then his ghost haunts the dorm, possesses Rob, and turns everyone into gay fantasies. Including Eric who he loves, either from when was alive, or after when Eric strived to be a better person in his memory. Sound about right? Looking forward to see where you go with this and what exactly this was all set-up for.