Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/22/16, 4:05 AM
Needs some work, you need to edit this.
Anonymous
12/22/16, 3:50 AM
Thanks for writing a second chapter. I always enjoy your stories. Have a great vacation!
Anonymous
12/22/16, 3:20 AM
Enjoy your vacation !! Definitely love to learn the mastermind of the Vicotory scheme and his purpose to bring these college students in by turning them into a typical meathead jock.
The Vault Keeper
12/22/16, 2:31 AM
Thanks guys, I'll keep posting some of the longer ones on here but I think the others are probably just a bit too short. They are more of the "cum and go" variety.
Anonymous
12/21/16, 10:57 PM
Yup the pix really add to the story!
Anonymous
12/21/16, 9:20 PM
Love to know more about Victory Jocks and Juice!! Cool stand-alone story which can end here but also continue : )
Anonymous
12/21/16, 7:07 PM
Great start! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
12/21/16, 7:06 PM
Great job with many possibilities to explore. The colllege athletic team, like football, can be benefitted from having these new students to join the team or having a variation of the program to transform them directly to players.
biguynj
12/21/16, 4:59 PM
Very good job hypno I enjoyed this . Loved the "juice" touch as it reminded me of my first taste of it . Hope to read more from you . Would love to read if your interested in dad and son watch the game
fan
12/21/16, 2:01 PM
you sir surprised me a lot! Knowing your usual stories, the plot really was something different from your usuals. I love it! Not only do you cater to your fans but you also surprise them! Keep up the good work and have a great day! :D