Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/8/16, 6:01 AM
Women are a part of the world. They have brothers -- hot sexy brothers -- who want to dominate and control their sister's hot boyfriends. I loved how you tied that together. And the ending, where you leave us hanging with the other brother coming over. Maybe Teddy's a step brother. The story is fine. The whole teddy bear thing is a stitch. It didn't upset to have a woman in the story. The mind control sex toy boyfriend was hot. It didn't piss me off. As for killing plans of people, I don't remember any story you've written that involves that story line. Your stories have some twisted aspect that makes one think. Like those stories you write with the devil. They're a stitch.
Anonymous
12/8/16, 5:10 AM
Super freaking hot!
Brody
12/8/16, 4:14 AM
Amazing, never stop adding to this series
wolfjock
12/8/16, 3:48 AM
Even before I read it, I knew I was in for something great. You never fail to deliver, man. This is top tier stuff - one for the history books.
Anonymous
12/8/16, 3:15 AM
HOT! Definately want more
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
12/8/16, 1:26 AM
In response to TimNJ's comment above, I can't recall anyone writing a story where whole teams were ACTUALLY killed in bus and plane crashes. I can think of several stories (including one I wrote) where teams were PRESUMED dead in such crashes but were actually alive. That's a very different situation. I understand that everyone has their "triggers," but reading comprehension is important.
TimNJ
12/7/16, 9:21 PM
Well it looks like you gave me a new fetish to get off to!! The hung reluctant boyfriend being transformed into a mindless baby talking whore was hot!!! One more thing.... While I would have preferred the Dad to the sister it did not bother me at all in comparison to other writers (not Willie CiCi ) killing off entire teams in bus and plane crashes. Now that an almost an entire team was killed in a plane crash in real life, Ihope that plot "device" is retired.
Anonymous
12/7/16, 8:06 PM
Love it. Super hot story.
Sparky
12/7/16, 7:39 PM
Amazing.. want to read more
Null0byte
12/7/16, 6:35 PM
Eh, while I will agree, the use of a woman in your stories is a bit distracting, I can see to where it could be used to great effect. While the comment above is correct that this is an exclusively gay-themed sigh, as long as the man ends of up as the controlled bot/slave/etc, I can see where it could be hot.