Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/8/16, 9:43 PM
Creative writing --- you're telling a story. If I have to use my imagination for every little detail, where's the creativity?
Anonymous
11/8/16, 8:49 PM
I love your writing style, this story especially. I get wood just by imagining what the conclusion will be like.
UchihaDEMS
11/8/16, 6:44 PM
A little bit cringy but acceptable, I want to know where this will be going. I would love to see more slaves added, like more pals of the football team or even adults like the coach or the dad of Eric! That would be very hot!
Master C's slave
11/8/16, 6:21 PM
interesting story, is there going to be a Part 2
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:31 PM
looking forward to more stories.
Anonymous
11/8/16, 2:05 PM
Please continue!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 1:49 PM
wonderful. So glad you've gotten back to writing. Can't wait for the rest of this!
Anonymous
11/8/16, 1:34 PM
Good story nice start. Like to read more!!
11/8/16, 1:18 PM
The cliffhanger...please continue it soon ! BTW, Not only Garret, but also John & Mike both have some special talents, so I guessed the purpose of the habitat is to get great minds and integrated them in a big hive/database for whatever devious reason.
Kyle
11/8/16, 11:27 AM
Excellent set of stories! Well done. And thank you.