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Anonymous
8/17/16, 6:07 PM
Another amazing chapter! And thank you for fulfilling my wish for Sean to be a slave! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
8/17/16, 5:32 PM
It's kinda more interesting to read for the story than the hypno/tf stuff at this point. I can sort of imagine Jeffrey could have lasting effects as well just from the "improper" dose, even if less than everyone else. He's a neat character because he's actually kind of realistic in his awkwardness about this new sexuality of his-- not a fetish stereotype like the others (Seth especially). Maybe the biggest twist is that the only lasting effect of any of this is just some greater empathy on everyone's part (Haha. what a bonerkiller a reasonable and positive ending would be. :P)
Aug 16, 2016
Anonymous
8/17/16, 5:32 PM
Good start
Anonymous
8/17/16, 5:26 PM
This is a brilliant start. I agree with many of the posters here...it IS better than some of the ones where English is the author's primary language. Please keep it going!
BenLedew
8/17/16, 9:29 AM
The story is excellent so far - emotions are plausible, and the language is great. I personally find cross-language sex very sexy when it happens in person, so this is little like that. :-)
Anonymous
8/17/16, 8:58 AM
I musta jerked to this 20 times already xD
Anonymous
8/17/16, 8:17 AM
Sexy, Hot and very Crazy!!!
TheWanderer
8/17/16, 7:07 AM
I should probably say this. Some of the idea in this story is from this story from Mafisto here: http://mcstories.com/Mafisto/Mafisto4.html And I REALLY like this a lot, although I don't think this author is around anymore...?
TheWanderer
8/17/16, 7:02 AM
To be honest, I came up with this and wrote it like in an hour or two? 😂 Thanks for all the compliment. So Chester, can I actually write a story in present tense or is it strictly past tense? 'Cause I always write stories as if it's happening right then, that's probably why I always mess up the tense I'm not sure about the whole swimming team, when I said Chris has a swimmers build I didn't mean that he's a swimmer...but that could change No, he won't change physically, only mentally...at least in this version of the story 😏
Anonymous
8/17/16, 6:30 AM
This is better than most, I hope for more.