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EJG
7/2/16, 6:47 AM
Great story. I'm in the rare camp of "LET BAD BOYS (Alex,JJ) WIN",departing from the usual stories here,end where the good guy(s) triumph. I guess it's because i'm a secret masochist.? My personal pervert desires,or what if's..? Alex caught wind of Professor Simon's machine through Jake's/maybe Eric,accidentally letting it slip. 1) Alex takes control of the Prof before we head to that "Simon Says" scenario 2) Alex & JJ add a few thugs to even out the faggot-Alpha ratio. His brothers perhaps.Maybe the one who ONCE was a rebel.? Gang going around harassing the neighbourhood. 3) I wonder what the Prof's device can do.. Alter physical appearances..? Alex with a bit more beef Thes are just MY thoughts,nothing to influence or put off the author. But Edlam,whatever scenario u write,and how you describe it,is freaking hot.
xORRiNx
7/2/16, 3:52 AM
Indeed :) I haven't decided if I want to continue with it yet though!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 3:45 AM
Your ending suggest that he will slowly become a fat gay slob with a tiny dick... Am I correct ? His dick is now smaller at 8 inchs
Anonymous
7/2/16, 2:51 AM
Wow! Great job!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 2:29 AM
It would be nice if this series can be concluded
Tox
7/2/16, 1:05 AM
I agree, very well written and I loved it all the way through. I also admit that I'm a fan of ViVe's Dumbing Down series, I was digging the parallel to that (at least how I took it ^_^).
Anonymous
7/2/16, 12:49 AM
love the story...looking forward to what is in your mind
MicroModal
7/1/16, 9:28 PM
LOVING this story line. Please keep it going in the same positive tone. It's fine for the changes to make Tom hotter and hornier, but to this point I feel like I want to experience what Tom's going thru, don't change that! :-)
BadDirtyTrickster
7/1/16, 8:50 PM
I don't understand why someone sees no problem in straight-to-gay stories but balk at gay-to-straight ones. For me, what gets me off is the concept of transformation, the process of turning someone into a different kind of person, the changes in body and mind that come with it, no matter which way it goes. Yes, I find it hot the idea of turning a nerdy gay dude into a straight dopey jock bro, even a homophobic one, not because of what they become, but from the transformation itself. And let's keep in mind, folks, this is FICTION! DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME! Keep doing your stuff, Orrin. And get an armour. Arrows always come when you step out of the safe zone. Good luck!
AMan
7/1/16, 8:33 PM
Nice bate fuel -- I bated all the way thru it. Thanks.