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Jun 28, 2016
Anonymous
7/2/16, 9:17 AM
So horny and I hope there is more! Love the graphic descriptions and this cute fatty losing his dick inside all that fatpad. Can the next chapter focus on Aaron exploring all the new sensations of his chub and then loving it all. Maybe Ben will have his own bath and the story will flow towards a super cute super chubby couple who entice, turn on and convert str8 jocks into an ever growing club of gay horny fat boys 😄
Anonymous
7/2/16, 7:25 AM
Continue it, please
Ragnarok
7/2/16, 6:56 AM
Awesome. Loved it as much as the first, which I don't say often with sequels. lol. Please write a third chapter and soon. :)
EJG
7/2/16, 6:47 AM
Great story. I'm in the rare camp of "LET BAD BOYS (Alex,JJ) WIN",departing from the usual stories here,end where the good guy(s) triumph. I guess it's because i'm a secret masochist.? My personal pervert desires,or what if's..? Alex caught wind of Professor Simon's machine through Jake's/maybe Eric,accidentally letting it slip. 1) Alex takes control of the Prof before we head to that "Simon Says" scenario 2) Alex & JJ add a few thugs to even out the faggot-Alpha ratio. His brothers perhaps.Maybe the one who ONCE was a rebel.? Gang going around harassing the neighbourhood. 3) I wonder what the Prof's device can do.. Alter physical appearances..? Alex with a bit more beef Thes are just MY thoughts,nothing to influence or put off the author. But Edlam,whatever scenario u write,and how you describe it,is freaking hot.
xORRiNx
7/2/16, 3:52 AM
Indeed :) I haven't decided if I want to continue with it yet though!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 3:45 AM
Your ending suggest that he will slowly become a fat gay slob with a tiny dick... Am I correct ? His dick is now smaller at 8 inchs
Anonymous
7/2/16, 2:51 AM
Wow! Great job!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 2:29 AM
It would be nice if this series can be concluded
Tox
7/2/16, 1:05 AM
I agree, very well written and I loved it all the way through. I also admit that I'm a fan of ViVe's Dumbing Down series, I was digging the parallel to that (at least how I took it ^_^).
Anonymous
7/2/16, 12:49 AM
love the story...looking forward to what is in your mind