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9/17/24, 5:23 PM
"Read how it ends on Patreon" I thought pay-stories were meant to be tagged explicitly with a big ol' dollar bill.

9/17/24, 5:31 PM
@[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878) Oh! TBH I didn't know - I will update and include at the top. Thank you for calling me out!

9/18/24, 12:10 PM
@[FatFantasies](/user/show/10054627) I might've been speaking out of my ass on that one, don't see anything in the story submissions area to say 'tag your pay stories' or even a way to add that tag. *shrugs*

9/18/24, 8:19 PM
@[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878) Also you might include a link to your Patreon

9/18/24, 8:22 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you! It's also on my Author Page!

9/19/24, 5:07 AM
@[FatFantasies](/user/show/10054627) Ah, this is referring to the rule about Sponsored stories—honestly, we need to update the rules to make this clearer, it's not very clear at the moment... My apologies about that. Pretty much, we ask that authors don't post 'teasers' or advertisements for otherwise complete stories if they're saying that the rest of the story is behind a paywalled link... _unless_ they're doing so via the 'Sponsored Stories' perk, which becomes available to authors via the $10 funding tier. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/fund We permit 'teasers' if they're posted as a Sponsored Story via the funding tier perk—it's one of the incentives we provide to get people interested in helping support the site's server costs. (You can currently see two Sponsored stories pinned to the top of the page right now, [such as this one](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10010398), for an example of what they look like.) If posting a story as a regular, non-Sponsored story: it's totally fine to, for example, post a standalone completed story and then have a link to one's Patreon at the bottom. And it's also fine to post a story where _early access_ to upcoming chapters is available via Patreon, so long as the rest of the story is posted to the main site eventually too. I don't want to pressure you to post the whole story here, though, especially if you'd prefer to keep it paywalled on your Patreon. I can also offer to take down this story for you if you'd rather keep it a Patreon exclusive. And my apologies again for this mix-up...
9/19/24, 1:41 AM
Please please please continue this story. The writing is impeccable, the lore is interesting, it has the potential to be a great, amazing piece.
9/18/24, 11:36 PM
Oh I hope he isn't shown a spiral by his gay friend who turns him into a good boy. Hehe Fun thing.

9/18/24, 11:52 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Just wait! Next two chapters will be posted in next 48 hours!
9/18/24, 9:50 PM
Part of me wants this so badly..I don't know why but I get so horny at the thought of it!
9/18/24, 8:31 PM
Yes, I'm in agreement, this is another hot chapter and the atmosphere in there is one that makes me wish I could be like these guys too - good clean healthy living, solid structure and rules, sharply defined dress code, strong parameters for safety and behavioural compliance - and all topped off with a heavy dose of scripture study study and evangelical preaching of the gospel. The story just gets better and better and Elder Martell has so much excitement to come once he starts his missionary work and knocking on those doors and being out working hard for a productive 12 hours minimum every single day. He is still showing some signs of resentment and a little reluctance to embrace his new identity but with some assertive encouragement from the other elders, he will soon comply and see that it really is all for the best. His new routine of early morning starts, long periods of shared scripture study and then whole days spent outside in public in his missionary suit and being around such good positive role models in the other elders will soon help reach his true potential.
9/1/24, 8:59 AM
An excellent chapter! Very different atmosphere from the previous ones but no less thrilling or magical. Hope we continue to see more in this amazing world you've built!

9/2/24, 8:10 PM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) I do have ideas for several other installments, to the point where they are distracting me from working on the one I am currently trying to finish.

9/18/24, 7:07 PM
@[Envious George](/user/show/10012614) Glad to hear it! Can't wait to read them when they're ready!
9/18/24, 1:57 PM
This is so incredibly hot, I wish to be like these guys too. I can't wait for the next part.
9/18/24, 1:09 PM
I would love to see this series continue. Puppets, guys controlled like puppets, guys turned into puppets, guys fisted like puppets, puppets controlling guys… there are so many different directions you could go with this to explore the themes of control, domination, hypnosis, or transformation. Love it all.
9/18/24, 12:44 PM
i want to to be a slutty boi too......
9/17/24, 12:07 PM
Working hard on chapter 4!

Zander
9/17/24, 5:33 PM
@[AnonDog](/user/show/10040587) Great chapter, I like the pace of the story) It's obvious that Dave will get both Mike and Julia's father. But I hope the story will end with an unexpected twist at the end, when Dave will have a big orgy with his slaves, and in the process the mind control device will fail) It would be funny to see their reaction to the fact that they were controlled all this time) and I would like to see the reaction of the men and women he controlled and fucked in front of their wives. So far, few authors have done such plot twists, but it would not be impossible (if the mind control device did not work during the storm and rain)

9/18/24, 9:10 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I agree so much. Hoping that Daves control will be broken momentarily. Or maybe Dave manages to control their bodies physically but their minds are unaware, aghast at the depraved acts he forcing them to do. Would love to hear them cursing and pleading with Dave as he humiliates the fuck out of them. Verbally insult Ryan and how his wife is watching him being turned into a slut. The mention of Julias younger brother makes me hope they'll be added to along with their military daddy. Have them fuck their brother in law. Maybe collect Ryans male family members too.