Recent Comments

6/3/16, 4:22 PM
Well written, as usual, and brimming with potential for a sequel. (Logan is entirely aware something unnatural went on, Hannah may have gotten more than she wished and what exactly is her dad's secret?)
Anonymous
6/3/16, 4:18 PM
Would have been better if Logan was actually into rough homophobes and Matt started using him.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 3:44 PM
New chapter please!!!
Anonymous
6/3/16, 3:05 PM
Sequel idea: Logan gets a serum that makes Hannah a lesbian as revenge.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 2:56 PM
maybe someone gave orrin this serum XD
Ragnarok
6/3/16, 2:50 PM
Very well written and I have liked many stories by this author before like Top to Bottom, however this is just not for probably 95% of us readers on this site. Please consider posting it and the Straight Bro series you are writing elsewhere though, because I am sure they would get higher praise and be better received from a different less gay audience.
shortnlookn@yahoo.com
6/3/16, 2:35 PM
I like how the author went out on a limb to try something new but personally I'm not feeling it. Would like to see this as the beginning of a longer story that involves the Hannah making a mistake with the serum and Matt being exposed to a substance that not just returns him to normal but makes him end up in Logan's arms right in front of her bigoted face.
6/3/16, 2:09 PM
Seeing the "bad person" (Hannah) seem to win in this story is a shame but once in a while seeing the roles reversed is a change I guess and turning an accepting straight guy into a homophobe sure is confronitng.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 1:53 PM
This is fuckin' A+.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 1:01 PM
I like this new direction Orrin is going! Even if it's not to everyone's immediate liking, it's good! Hope you keep writing, bro!