Recent Comments

daretoedge
7/25/25, 2:19 PM
Nice, gradual transformation, great physical descriptions, really gets you in the cocky jock headspace. Starting each morning off with the changes in the roommate dynamic and Stiles' body (6 to 7 to 8 inches) was very hot and set the tone for each chapter.

7/31/25, 12:22 AM
@daretoedge Thanks for the comment! :D I did enjoy showing the shifting dynamic with his roommate. :3
7/25/25, 12:15 PM
Awesome! As a Sterek shipper I’d totally love to see Derek come investigate

7/31/25, 12:21 AM
@[JockPupTraxxx](/user/show/26244) I also ship Sterek! I'm not sure how I would integrate Derek, tbh. I'd probably make him even bigger. šŸ˜…
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/30/25, 11:10 PM
Damn this was a good story! Oh to be Brian! Or,, as he was called in the last two chapters when he forgot his name...The boy.
7/30/25, 10:56 PM
I like the story. I want Vale to fuck Lucien hard and see a sex scene where Lucien sucks Vale's dick under the table when Adrian talks to Lucien's wife saying that now he will work for him without suspecting that he is under Vale's table). But although I like corruption, I also want everyone who was under control to be freed in the Finale and someone smarter could stop Vale once and for all!
7/30/25, 10:23 PM
Looking forward to Danny's further adventures in jail.
7/30/25, 6:31 PM
Loved this story, and would absolutely love a sequel! Great writing and themes!

7/30/25, 9:39 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Also have tons of questions about the filing cabinet/suggestions for a sequel, should there be one. Would love to discuss :)
7/30/25, 8:39 PM
your writing is fantastic. the ideas, the plot, everything is perfect. i'm loving it and I hope that there will be much more :-)
Apr 17, 2010
7/30/25, 8:36 PM
Super creative, very funny too!:heart_eyes:
3/28/19, 4:38 AM
This story's based off a [Tumblr post I made in 2016](https://bodriversblog.tumblr.com/post/153761234249/it-was-a-stupid-dare-and-you-were-a), using a pic I photoshopped with tats, and muscle morphing that I tried to keep realistic. Here I focus on the hypnosis that was only barely hinted at originally, but if you wanna get a sneak peak at what's in store for "You," the character, I'm using pretty much everything from the original post. Except names being on rugby jerseys (I'm embarassed now that I've actually learned the sport). Plus I'm really gonna flesh out what happens to "You" over the next year, during his descent into owned Meathead-dom. @ChronoSeth I had several chapters outlined, but I actually plan to update JNW with a rewritten first installment. I can tell you right now I plan on updating all the fashions on the characters, but there were some bigger problems that also needed to be fixed.

7/30/25, 6:49 PM
@[BODriver](/user/show/108959) the shorter version was already one of my favorite reads. I really hope you choose to continue with this now that you're writing again. Pretty Please! With dancing meat emojis and dumbbells on it?
Apr 28, 2005
7/30/25, 3:45 PM
That was very cool and sexy!!!!:heart_eyes: