Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/25/16, 6:38 PM
Nice. I like the way this seems to be headed. Since you made it possible that the Son can love the Dad's new lover as much as he does. That kind of which makes a lot of incest and options available in the future chapters. Please write the next one quickly. :)
Anonymous
5/25/16, 6:30 PM
Very nice!
Anonymous
5/25/16, 5:42 PM
Oh, the previous reader made an excellent suggestion! Some shaved lines on the sides of his head would give him a much needed ghetto look. A haircut scene would be so cool to read. Other reason for the lack of response would be that there was a bunch of updates coming at the same time. At the first I hadn't noticed the update of the third chapter.
xORRiNx
5/25/16, 5:22 PM
I'll consider expanding!
5/25/16, 4:08 PM
not sure tbh, probably not, though i like the idea of the gas thing.
tomozco
5/25/16, 3:45 PM
Thanks for the comments! It's always nice to know that someone is enjoying your creation. I welcome all of your feedback and will consider your suggestions as they fit, though I will continue to write based on what interests me more. Cheers! :)
Anonymous
5/25/16, 3:29 PM
do you plan to make a sequel to this hot story?
screamingmoist
5/25/16, 3:24 PM
Thanks for reading everyone!
Anonymous
5/25/16, 11:20 AM
More please!
Anonymous
5/25/16, 9:03 AM
LOVING this series! Hoping the finale chapter will be the length of the previous 3 combined :) may I request a haircut scene? or at least incorporating the final transformation to short black hair. I think the reason for the lack of response is due to the time between chapter releases as well as the pacing being a bit slow with only a single chapter available to read at the time.