Recent Comments

BoonBoon
5/25/16, 8:00 AM
Just will be 4 parts? Oh, man, sorry to read that! There was many possibilities for humiliation or body changes. Don't take it as a harsh criticism, but I must say I'm really disappointed, since almost nothing has happened yet, and compared with your other stories, this one doesn't takes advantage of the changes, characters and places. Would you consider to make a fifth instalment? I've saddly noticed that there wasn't a big response of the audience, and maybe that's your reason to make it so short, but I think there was many hot scenarios to exploit, many hot situations that may happen if you inject some energy in the plot.
May 24, 2016
5/25/16, 7:19 AM
The story seemed a bit hurried: I would have been interested in seeing a bit more about their thoughts and their progression in general. Still, I liked this a lot. Waiting for your next story. :-)
Anonymous
5/25/16, 7:01 AM
Really hot story, man! The changes you've got lined up for Phil are great. I can't wait for his cock to start growing and the increased pre cum to kick in!
Anonymous
5/25/16, 6:14 AM
Huh...I was kinda expecting the genie to be the one to be Brendan's new husband...
Anonymous
5/25/16, 5:14 AM
Great story!! Really hot!!!
LLOYD
5/25/16, 5:01 AM
Very hot! I love that you're taking your time with it, but - ya know - hurry the hell up : ) Seriously though, good stuff. Thanks...
May 24, 2016
Anonymous
5/25/16, 5:01 AM
Good first effort. Writing is the challenge. Editing is the hard work. Spend some time editing. Makes for an easier read.
Anonymous
5/25/16, 4:19 AM
Great twist with the introduction of the cop
Anonymous
5/25/16, 3:22 AM
Love the story. Great writing. Keep it up :)
Anonymous
5/25/16, 2:57 AM
Definitely your best work since the start of facets. Great story and super sexy! Loved Nicks struggle through it!