Recent Comments

5/16/16, 4:33 AM
Willie, you've clearly got a good head and your shoulders and the right attitude. Keep writing your stories. If YOU enjoy it, it doesn't matter in the slightest what anyone else thinks.
TimNJ
5/16/16, 4:19 AM
I like it and I wish the chapters were longer! Now mlease tell me he dumps Chloe but hooks up with her brother!
Anonymous
5/16/16, 1:53 AM
Interesting!!!
Anonymous
5/16/16, 1:49 AM
Greeting card? What section of Hallmark are you in?
Fetboy
5/15/16, 11:58 PM
Wow, awesome story! Please continue, this is insanely hot!
May 10, 2016
5/15/16, 9:58 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys! I could certainly imagine more stories in this universe. We'll see . . . ;-)
Jake260
5/15/16, 8:28 PM
Great chapter, I love your writing I can't wait for another chapter
jsh71603@gmail.com
5/15/16, 7:30 PM
Emails were 2015, so the tumblr might be gone, but I can't get enough of reading this story either. It brought back some memories of me being with that hazy fuzzy feeling in my head so I can relate to that.
Anonymous
5/15/16, 6:18 PM
Good, good! Man, I love this story. And about the link to tumblr, I think Derek is so dumb now, that he was unable to attach the link! LOL
Anonymous
5/15/16, 6:02 PM
I was waiting for the next chapter for so long, and It is as good as I hoped it would be! I'm anxious to read about the changes in his behavior and clothing style! I'm wondering, the change will affect his family too, or the perception of Phil's family about him? I mean, all of them will become into wetbacks, or they will think on Phil as a domestic employee?