Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/6/16, 5:30 AM
Great story!!!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
5/6/16, 5:22 AM
Well-written as usual, but it is not what I am used to reading on this site....which does not mean that it is bad. However IMO there is too much intrigue and too little sex!
VRL
5/6/16, 2:53 AM
Though yes i agree i liked derek williams writing,please restore his mind
VRL
5/6/16, 2:52 AM
Your Grammar Sucks,its on youtube with a guy also ironically named Jack
Anonymous
5/6/16, 2:49 AM
Wow, interesting and dark twist.
jsh71603@gmail.com
5/5/16, 9:12 PM
Wow, love this story..this really happened?? Love the dynamic of the switch
Anonymous
5/5/16, 7:07 PM
Very powerful---makes me tremble
Anonymous
5/5/16, 7:02 PM
Dumb down Derek !! There'll be a hero to rescue him.
Jack Andros
5/5/16, 5:43 PM
z119z: I agree totally. But the whole process was in Derek's hands. The only thing I made him do (well, asked / encouraged / insisted on) do was write about it...
Anonymous
5/5/16, 3:31 PM
z119z is right on the money.