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10/17/25, 10:39 PM
Yes! Another great chapter of my favorite story. Jamie really is like a fish caught on a line being reeled in, or maybe a dog on a leash. Either way, he may still have some fight in him, but the line keeps getting shorter. I hope he eventually becomes a good and powerful DS-013 for Master, fully living up to that glimpse we got of his potential. This chapter is fairly straightforward, so there's not as much to speculate on as with some of the others, but there is still stuff to wonder about. Will we get to see the repercussions for Kane/Luxor with the League? That'd be fun, as would a confrontation between him and DS-013. And then there's Jamie's power collection at the end. What amount of havoc will he wreak before Master brings him to heel? Or will he even manage to thwart Master? And if he did, what kind of life would he have? Because I'd say Archie’s pretty on the money with that one. Probably the best outcome is if he and Master reach some kind of accommodation, leaving him with a degree of independence and maybe limitations on what Master can make him do. There have been hints of Master wanting to use Jamie/DS-013 in a heroic capacity, and planning to exercise his control with a relatively light hand. I can hardly wait to see how it all turns out. Keep up the amazing work, @NeonDemon!
10/17/25, 9:43 PM
Really love Cole catching what was going on and sending March out to do something where the effects of Oby would be (mostly) negated. That's surprisingly sweet.
10/17/25, 2:25 AM
Amazing as always

10/17/25, 9:37 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Thank you! You too! XD
10/13/25, 12:20 AM
This story is incredibly hot! I'm eager to read what other changes the other nerds will suffer. Also, I'd love to know what other unflattering features the formerly handsome jocks are acquiring. I'm curious that you mentioned this shy nerd got perfect teeth, which implies he had the opposite before... so that feature went somewhere else, right?

10/17/25, 8:36 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Thanks! I hadn't thought too much about those three other than as setup to get here. I'm past the halfway point now of where I originally expected to go. Maybe I'll have enough in me to revisit those dudes.
10/13/25, 1:22 AM
Wow, you'd think I'd be immune to transformation stories by this point, but this one really hit all my buttons. Nice work!

10/17/25, 8:34 PM
@[Cris Kane](/user/show/38728) Thank you! They still get me too. haha. Love your stories.
So hot
10/17/25, 6:37 PM
Part 2 please!
10/17/25, 4:55 PM
It seems like its being set up that the dad's big client is the company producing the Oby. So, he won't drug the dad just to make him accept Toby and Gabe, not to just to satisfy his lust, not just all the reasons he has considered so far, but because he needs him to get into the drug company, find out if there can be a cure, and stop the dissemination of the drug. All so noble, all so well intentioned. But the best way to get Oby to stick, is to fuck it into his brain of course, and while he is there, may as well let him know his sons already serve his new master, just get everyone on the same page. Also, its a bit odd how its seeming more and more like Oby is a big PR campaign against gay guys. Thats a lot of effort and hate that needs to get ironed out from the top if this problem is going to be fixed.
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10/16/25, 10:57 PM
Cool so the sequel is just never coming. Great.

10/17/25, 4:35 PM
@Anonymous No need to be salty about it, but I'll admit it's taken me too long for the next chapters. Problem is I was stuck with certain key elements of the story, I'm brushing details on the next scene so it doesn't feel forced.
10/17/25, 4:30 PM
We are so close to the climax! And while I can definitely sympathize with Jamie, he strikes me as being stubbornly difficult. Jamie already gave in and became Master's latest drone. Makes me feel sorry for Dusk. Jamie has so much anger in him. And probably tied into that mental damn in his psyche. So taking the collar should just be a formality. Yet his resistance is going to cause so many problems. Both Kane and Jamie need an attitude adjustment. Kane needs to get humbled. And Jamie needs to get that rod out of his ass. He just had a pleasant get together with Dusk and now he is being all stuck up to him.
10/17/25, 4:14 PM
I need more of this! But please don't make him fem.