Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/7/16, 4:54 PM
hot
Lenny
4/7/16, 4:03 PM
Some hellish aspects to this story will happen. Ben will not end up a pig though. I developed my plans for how to finish the story. I have two chapters on my laptop I will post tonight. I have ideas for about 4 more chapters after that with a twist ending in mind.
Amalianetwork
4/7/16, 3:37 PM
Great first story! Grammar and spelling was pretty much correct. I would suggest separating paragraphs. The content was great though! Hope to see more!
Hypnotic Subjugation
4/7/16, 3:18 PM
So great! Followed the series from beginning to end and I must say I loved the slow progression of Davis' brainwashing.
Anonymous
4/7/16, 11:01 AM
Strangely unsatisfying, unless we are getting set up for a whole new set of conversions. Thought the story had a lot more life left in it!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 3:19 AM
For plenty of hypno foot stuff, check out stories by Eigh. Some are on this site, but I think the complete compilation can be found here: http://www.pridesites.com/omelissokomos/eigh/index.html
Cutielatino22
4/7/16, 2:17 AM
I want some of that water to change my skin
BadDirtyTrickster
4/6/16, 10:14 PM
Thank you all for all the good comments from the start. It means a lot, really! If anyone is interested, I have more stories up at http://baddirtytrickster.tumblr.com/Story-Archive You're all welcome. Cheers!
lifter
4/6/16, 9:29 PM
HOT! please continue with Riley!
Anonymous
4/6/16, 6:41 PM
Ben will become literally in a pig? Personally, I hope you do not follow the direction proposed by the last comment. Don't get me wrong, and no offense to the reader, that would be good if you want to add anguish and body horror, and is great if you want to go in that direction, but that would transform it into a horror story instead of an erotic tale. The stories that feature transformation into inanimate objects and creatures have a lot of anguish, despair and a sense of loss, so is hard to be excited by those hard feelings (just my point of view). But hey, if you want to go for that, go ahead, Mr. Lenny. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.